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rhymarhyma
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PostSubject: One   One EmptySat Oct 08, 2011 1:43 pm
When I'm tired of feeling some of the feelings I've felt
I grab my pen and my pad, and I melt...

As it takes many raindrops to create stormy weather

the pen and the paper and my heart come together

Like the hues of a rainbow under the ever-spinning sun

the pen and the paper and my mind become one

Like constellations in the heavens on a pitch-black night

the pen and the paper and my body unite

and when the heart and the mind and the body have died

the pen and the paper and my soul...unified

One thing I know, one thing I can control

one heart, one mind, one body, one soul
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PostSubject: Re: One   One EmptySat Oct 08, 2011 1:46 pm
You're back !
Loved it !
"As it takes many raindrops to create stormy weather"
loved this line especially almost a poem unto itself.

God Bless !!!
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PostSubject: Re: One   One EmptySat Oct 08, 2011 1:47 pm
The pen and paper were my first counselors after a tumultuous life. As always, love your work and the messages it gives. I've missed it terribly.
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rhymarhyma
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PostSubject: Re: One   One EmptySat Oct 08, 2011 2:20 pm
Right on! New job, new apartment, new nap-time, and it all took some re-adjustment. Glad to "see" you guys again. Word.
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PostSubject: Re: One   One EmptySat Oct 08, 2011 2:25 pm
Congratulations on the job and new pad. It's rough out there.

We are thrilled to have you back!
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PostSubject: Re: One   One EmptySat Oct 08, 2011 2:52 pm
Glad to have you back here been asking about you wondered where you'd been?
RHYMARHYMA in da' house !
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PostSubject: Re: One   One EmptySun Oct 09, 2011 12:29 am
Word. Three times the charm and junk. So glad I took the time to read these.
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