cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: HIDDEN LOVE Mon Oct 03, 2011 7:48 am | |
| HIDDEN LOVE By Jan Phillips
Your arms hold so tender Your thoughts are so sweet It makes me feel safe Whenever we meet Your shoulders show courage Your lips taste of desire When I’m close to you My blood turns to liquid fire I think of you Each hour of the day With thoughts of special love Though why I cannot say I guess its because In every way You are the light of my life And the ending of my day Your respect and admiration Is all that I require But to be the love of your life Is what I desire If ever I lose you My body may not die But the sun will be behind a cloud And the heavens will cry My heart will still beat With a love that will not die In a body filled with sorrow And thoughts that cannot lie For I have loved you always With everything I had Some people think this love is wrong I cannot believe its bad Without you My life would be bare Although the memories I have Will always be there So give me some hope That your love shall be mine And together we’ll walk Until the end of time
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christianonfire7 PENCIL PUSHER (26-50 posts)
Posts : 49 Join date : 2011-08-13
| Subject: Re: HIDDEN LOVE Mon Oct 03, 2011 9:48 am | |
| This is such a beautiful piece you wrote, the depth of love is so strong. Makes me almost taste it myself because of your words. There's nothing more wonderful than love, true and beautiful love. Well written. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: HIDDEN LOVE Mon Oct 03, 2011 12:08 pm | |
| I do believe I see a difference in your work lately. I love it. You are really getting the creative juices flowing. Great job. |
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tbing APPRENTICE (6-25 posts)
Posts : 8 Join date : 2011-10-06
| Subject: Re: HIDDEN LOVE Sun Oct 09, 2011 7:16 pm | |
| I like this one. This is how I felt when I was married but could not express it to my husband at the time. And it makes me think about the one true special man that I would hope to have in my life. sweet very sweet. |
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tbing APPRENTICE (6-25 posts)
Posts : 8 Join date : 2011-10-06
| Subject: Re: HIDDEN LOVE Sun Oct 09, 2011 7:16 pm | |
| I like this one. This is how I felt when I was married but could not express it to my husband at the time. And it makes me think about the one true special man that I would hope to have in my life. sweet very sweet. |
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