God's Presence

Subject: God's Presence Mon Oct 10, 2011 7:29 am

Wind wispering through the tops of the trees
The laughter of water as it runs down the stream
The shout of thunder of a moment passing by
A drop of water sliding off a leaf like a tear that escapes the eye
The dryness of sand, as a spirit without Him close
The pull of the tide as He calls us to His side
The comfort of an evening breeze caressing the cheek

Subject: Re: God's Presence Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:46 am

I enjoyed being able to see/feel each line. They felt real. Funny thogh, I picture God literally picking up the waters and pulling a tide in, maybe as you would when making a bed. You know the whosh of it as it is being flipped to the other side of the bed, but in reverse. God job!

Subject: Re: God's Presence Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:16 pm

Wow, what awesome work! Love the use of nature in this. The sensory comparisons with the Lord and nature make it a powerful piece.

Subject: Re: God's Presence Mon Oct 10, 2011 4:26 pm

Nice imagery to get lost in for a bit...
God Bless.

Subject: Re: God's Presence Mon Oct 10, 2011 4:41 pm

I wasn't ready to stop reading... :-) Beautiful

Subject: Re: God's Presence Mon Oct 10, 2011 4:45 pm

This poem reminds me of "How great Thou art"

Subject: Re: God's Presence Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:39 am