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Join date : 2011-10-11
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PostSubject: WATER   WATER EmptyTue Oct 11, 2011 10:43 am



Are you paddling in the shallows
Are your ankles getting wet
Safe within your comfy margins
You are in command and yet
There is so much out there for you
Drowning in the spirits flow
Come and wade out in the water
There is much you need to know.

See Me walking on the water
It is under My control
Here's My hand run quickly to it
Time is passing gentle soul
We will splash and swim together
Joyous in The Spirits hold
You were meant to be a lion
Brave and fearless, loving, bold.
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PostSubject: Re: WATER   WATER EmptyTue Oct 11, 2011 10:57 am
Wow! Love this one. I floated on the wave of each line and let myself be swept away by it.

Come and wade out in the water
There is much you need to know.

Time is passing gentle soul
We will splash and swim together
Joyous in The Spirits hold
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PostSubject: Re: WATER   WATER EmptyTue Oct 11, 2011 1:32 pm
Very nice, thank you for sharing.
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