akingthomas100 PENCIL PUSHER (26-50 posts)
Posts : 32 Age : 44 Join date : 2011-10-05 Location : Mobile, Alabama
| Subject: "There's Only One Who truely Knows Me" Tue Oct 11, 2011 10:59 am | |
| I was born alone And did some wrong. My days are long because I'm always home. My friends had gone where they're heavenly known So I sung this song How life must go on. to me it was shown how the years had grown but, without any idea of where my life belonged. I had to learn it all on my own That I waws born to return to HIS home. Someday or another I too will have gone! |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: "There's Only One Who truely Knows Me" Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:20 am | |
| I think this is a small portion of a larger work. It is a great start. I like it. So many questions arise as I read this. What was the wrong done and their consequences? Why are you always home? Did all of your friends go to their heavenly home, a lot of them, a few of them and why? I thought you might like to know about the typo in the following line: That I waws born to return to HIS home.
My favorite lines: So I sung this song How life must go on. |
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akingthomas100 PENCIL PUSHER (26-50 posts)
Posts : 32 Age : 44 Join date : 2011-10-05 Location : Mobile, Alabama
| Subject: Re: "There's Only One Who truely Knows Me" Wed Oct 12, 2011 10:32 am | |
| Thanks for the interest in this piece. Yes it is merely the beginning of my stories. I have so many to share. I use to live my life dwelling on the many losses instead of focusing on all the positive things in my life. I had only a hand full of true friends and when they went away I felt like I was in this world alone. I came to the realization one day that to each is its' own and no one can live your life for you and nor could you for anyone else. I did not live a perfect life and for all my bad choices I was definiately faced with the consiquences and had to endure them on my own. Well I thought I was all alone, but I found great friend in my LORD and Savior. He has certainly saved me on many occassions in my life. I would always sit around and let my life just pass me by day in and day out. "The years had grown." I didn't know or understand my purpose on this earth. "Without any idea of where my life belonged." I had to change my way of thinking and even coached myself to get up and do something for myself. "so I sung this song how life must go on." My friends had all gone their different ways. Some went home to be with the lord, some choice to live a life in the streets and even told me "felt like they were in heaven." I had to make my own choice and learned in the process that I had to get my life right and become closer to god so when he calls me home, I would be ready. "I had to learn it on my own that I was born to returrn to HIS home." Only my lord can truely judge me with fairness to my life lived. "Someday or another I too will be gone." There is a lot that I am saying in this poem and I hope it wasn't too far fetched! |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: "There's Only One Who truely Knows Me" Wed Oct 12, 2011 10:51 am | |
| I can't wait to read the other stories you have to share, and I am so glad you made through to the better side of hardship to our Lord Jesus Christ. He is so good to us. By the way, beautiful children! They look like a handful. |
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akingthomas100 PENCIL PUSHER (26-50 posts)
Posts : 32 Age : 44 Join date : 2011-10-05 Location : Mobile, Alabama
| Subject: Re: "There's Only One Who truely Knows Me" Wed Oct 12, 2011 11:38 am | |
| Thanks a lot! Oh, yes maam they are a joyful handful.I always aked the lord for purpose and knowledgable worth of my life and he delivered five times. My four children and my gift of words. He is an awesome god and I thank him every minute of the day for allowing me to see through my eyes' blind when I felt like I couldn't see the things that were right in front of me. Now I am jable to see things from a far before they even begin to come my way. |
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