rita.kellogg PENCIL PUSHER (26-50 posts)
Posts : 49 Age : 56 Join date : 2011-09-18 Location : Fort Wayne, Indiana
| Subject: Channels Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:41 am | |
| Channels
Stuck inside are feelings that are forming, thoughts that are developing, words to be spoken and desires to be fulfilled. Each of which are growing and developing into a masterpiece.
These make for moments of agony because of the pent up mural in my heart and mind. And why is it that I continue to hold on to such a work of art? This mural can be a thing of beauty to treasure. The feelings, thoughts, words and desires are forever captured by my heart and mind, but self-gratification takes over and urges all to be revealed. The unrelenting selfless love is the greater factor that also pushes for revelation. Love must escape and is channeled through expressed feelings, thoughts in action, spoken words and fulfilled desires.
I am collecting all of my treasures for you my love. As we grow together, a beautiful mural is being painted in my heart and mind. When moments come that are right, I will express the feelings that are forming, I will put my thoughts into action, I will speak the words that are on my heart and I will fulfill the desires that continue to grow. I will have a life time to share this treasure in my heard and know that it will only get more and more beautiful. I love you, for you complete me.
By; Rita Kellogg |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Channels Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:06 pm | |
| Beautiful. Loved these lines: As we grow together, a beautiful mural is being painted in my heart and mind. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Channels Mon Oct 10, 2011 4:21 pm | |
| I liked the use of 'mural' got a visual from that. "Each of which are growing and developing into a masterpiece" A masterpiece in progress is how I referred to my fiance today as she was feeling a bit disheartened and asked:"what's wrong with me?"
God Bless. |
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worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: Channels Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:09 pm | |
| Very lovely poem. Rhyming is good but I also love non rhyming verse very much. Thanks for sharing. All glory to the Father. |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Channels Tue Oct 11, 2011 12:07 am | |
| Loved the thought of a mural! Very inspiring and lovely. |
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gwynditmars PENCIL PUSHER (26-50 posts)
Posts : 34 Age : 62 Join date : 2011-10-11 Location : Fort Wayne, Indiana
| Subject: Re: Channels Wed Oct 12, 2011 8:26 pm | |
| Dear Rita, I am so glad that you posted this website link on facebook~ Thank you so very much. My dear friend. So glad you enjoy writing too. I liked you poem. Thank you for sharing your heart, so candidly! Hope to find and read more of your posts. Love in Christ, Gwyn L. Ditmars |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Channels Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:30 am | |
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