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PostSubject: God is here   God is here EmptyThu Oct 13, 2011 11:37 am
Okay I have read most of the poems on here. One I read this morning lead me to write this.
It is called a palindrome or is supposed to be one. Please be totally honest if you decide to comment on this. I really need to know whats wrong with it so my next one can be better I hope. Don't worry I'm tough.
God Bless

God is here!!!

Blue Skies, Skies Blue
Crying eyes, eyes crying
Coming season’s cold hot
Unknown reasons for distraught

Children playing loudly
Men graying proudly
Women knitting steadily
Parents grieving dreadfully


Walk Proudly, Pray Proudly
Testify, Testify, Testify, Loudly
Coming Glory, Joyfully Cheer
God is near! God is here!!
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PostSubject: Re: God is here   God is here EmptyThu Oct 13, 2011 12:14 pm
Those are so hard to do! You have inspired me though to try. So glad you shared this with us!

I can only do one or two sentences at most!


Always pray, Pray always
Sing and Praise, Praise and sing
Joyful are His People! His people are joyful!
We are loved! We are loved.
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PostSubject: Re: God is here   God is here EmptyThu Oct 13, 2011 12:29 pm
I think you're both brilliant!
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PostSubject: Re: God is here   God is here EmptyFri Oct 14, 2011 10:04 pm
There is a really strong message here. It speaks volumes in just a few sentences. Thanks for sharing. All glory to the Father.
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PostSubject: Re: God is here   God is here EmptySat Oct 15, 2011 2:51 am
"God is near! God is here!!"

Very, Very...near.

GOD BLESS!!!
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