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chele
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PostSubject: Mommy's Girls   Mommy's Girls EmptyFri Oct 14, 2011 2:24 am

Sometimes I sit and
Just watch you play
My little Chelsey Brooke
And Chyanne Renee

When you are sleeping
I sneak in and look
My Chyanne Renee
And little Chelsey Brooke

And in those moments
I find it hard to breathe
Because I am so blessed
It is hard to believe

Your names are a song
My heart sings each day
My little Chelsey Brooke
and Chyanne Renee

God keep them safe
Write thier names in Your Book
My Chyanne Renee
And little Chelsey Brooke
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PostSubject: Re: Mommy's Girls   Mommy's Girls EmptyFri Oct 14, 2011 2:34 am

So sweet! I know the feeling!

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chele
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PostSubject: Re: Mommy's Girls   Mommy's Girls EmptyFri Oct 14, 2011 2:54 am

Thanks Miss Thena! They are my little treasures!
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PostSubject: Re: Mommy's Girls   Mommy's Girls EmptyFri Oct 14, 2011 12:01 pm

Oh my goodness. That is so adorable. I know the feeling too, having had three boys.
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PostSubject: Re: Mommy's Girls   Mommy's Girls EmptyFri Oct 14, 2011 12:53 pm

Very sweet homage to children. I loved this part most:

Your names are a song
My heart sings each day
My little Chelsey Brooke
and Chyanne Renee
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cleo574
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PostSubject: Re: Mommy's Girls   Mommy's Girls EmptyFri Oct 14, 2011 1:09 pm

Having had two daughters, I can relate. It was beautiful and I felt a true mother's love. Keep up the good work.
God bless
Jan P
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PostSubject: Re: Mommy's Girls   Mommy's Girls EmptyFri Oct 14, 2011 5:17 pm

This a great poem for bedtime rhymes and it will certainly soothe their ears. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
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chele
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PostSubject: Re: Mommy's Girls   Mommy's Girls EmptyFri Oct 14, 2011 9:30 pm

Thanks everyone! You guys rock! 8)
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