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PostSubject: Inside I cry   Inside I cry EmptySun Oct 16, 2011 12:33 pm

That day plays over and over, when you left me and the boys
I see an echoing, distant, silent noise
There was no goodbye, no "see ya later" letter
and though I know you moved up to something way better
it hurts my heart being so far apart
and it's harder than I thought making a brand new start
Just me and the kids trying to do it all alone
and I know I'm supposed to be a man and I'm supposed to be grown
but it pains me, you don't answer every time that I call
so I try and stand strong and I try and stand tall
but inside I cry, when you left it hit like a bomb
now I'm confined in my mind...and I miss you, mom
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PostSubject: Re: Inside I cry   Inside I cry EmptySun Oct 16, 2011 5:04 pm

That's so sad. You expressed that so very well. I can't imagine such a loss so young.
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PostSubject: Re: Inside I cry   Inside I cry EmptyTue Oct 18, 2011 1:11 pm

Such a sweet tribute of love and an expression of the loss you still feel.

I still miss my mom and dad and I'm old!


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PostSubject: Re: Inside I cry   Inside I cry EmptyTue Oct 18, 2011 1:24 pm

Thank you, guys. I'll always miss my mama. No doubt. And hey, we're only as old as we feel, right. Young at heart. Word.
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