rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Spiritual dope Sun Oct 16, 2011 12:35 pm | |
| He can barely walk and he can hardly talk and I always see this guy up and down my block Dazed and confused, in his own little zone Stumblin', bumblin', lost...and all alone All the kids make fun of him and give him the bird and he just tells 'em that he loves 'em and tries to give 'em the word But nobody understands him, or they just don't want to hear it Everybody thinks he's touched, but he's just touched by the spirit
He's got an eighth of faith and an ounce of hope and a kilo of love He's on spiritual dope
Awww man, here she comes again endin' every sentence with a little "Amen" Hittin' every street, always goin' door to door If you take a little taste then she'll try to give you more She wants to get you hooked so you will never get away She promises tomorrow and says forget yesterday A one-hitter quitter, dope that'll truly make you feel She says it's pure and uncut, and what she pushes is real
She's got an eighth of faith and an ounce of hope and a kilo of love She's on spiritual dope
One day I took a chance and danced with these two dope-heads and I asked 'em if they cared about what their drug spreads The guy looked at the lady and she looked back at the guy and they both looked me in the eye and asked "You wanna get high?" He said "C'mon, just a little, I promise it won't hurt you." "You'll never be alone," she said, "this will never desert you." So I opened it up; 1 Corinthians 13 and now I'm the new pusher in the spiritual dope scene
I've got an eighth of faith and an ounce of hope and a kilo of love I'm on spiritual dope |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Spiritual dope Sun Oct 16, 2011 12:51 pm | |
| This should be on the radio very catchy hook, nice job. Peace. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Spiritual dope Sun Oct 16, 2011 5:45 pm | |
| The end made me laugh. I love the unique twist. |
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worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: Spiritual dope Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:33 pm | |
| WOW....pure genius is what that is! |
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chele WRITER (51-100 posts)
Posts : 56 Join date : 2011-09-22 Location : South Carolina
| Subject: Re: Spiritual dope Tue Oct 18, 2011 1:05 am | |
| Makes me want to get high (on spiritual dope, of course)! Loved it!
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