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PostSubject: Spiritual dope   Spiritual dope EmptySun Oct 16, 2011 12:35 pm

He can barely walk and he can hardly talk
and I always see this guy up and down my block
Dazed and confused, in his own little zone
Stumblin', bumblin', lost...and all alone
All the kids make fun of him and give him the bird
and he just tells 'em that he loves 'em and tries to give 'em the word
But nobody understands him, or they just don't want to hear it
Everybody thinks he's touched, but he's just touched by the spirit

He's got an eighth of faith
and an ounce of hope
and a kilo of love
He's on spiritual dope

Awww man, here she comes again
endin' every sentence with a little "Amen"
Hittin' every street, always goin' door to door
If you take a little taste then she'll try to give you more
She wants to get you hooked so you will never get away
She promises tomorrow and says forget yesterday
A one-hitter quitter, dope that'll truly make you feel
She says it's pure and uncut, and what she pushes is real

She's got an eighth of faith
and an ounce of hope
and a kilo of love
She's on spiritual dope

One day I took a chance and danced with these two dope-heads
and I asked 'em if they cared about what their drug spreads
The guy looked at the lady and she looked back at the guy
and they both looked me in the eye and asked "You wanna get high?"
He said "C'mon, just a little, I promise it won't hurt you."
"You'll never be alone," she said, "this will never desert you."
So I opened it up; 1 Corinthians 13
and now I'm the new pusher in the spiritual dope scene

I've got an eighth of faith
and an ounce of hope
and a kilo of love
I'm on spiritual dope
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PostSubject: Re: Spiritual dope   Spiritual dope EmptySun Oct 16, 2011 12:51 pm

This should be on the radio very catchy hook,
nice job.
Peace.
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PostSubject: Re: Spiritual dope   Spiritual dope EmptySun Oct 16, 2011 5:45 pm

The end made me laugh. I love the unique twist.
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PostSubject: Re: Spiritual dope   Spiritual dope EmptyMon Oct 17, 2011 10:33 pm

WOW....pure genius is what that is!
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PostSubject: Re: Spiritual dope   Spiritual dope EmptyTue Oct 18, 2011 1:05 am

Makes me want to get high (on spiritual dope, of course)! Loved it!
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