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rhymarhyma
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PostSubject: The resurrection of me   The resurrection of me EmptyMon Oct 17, 2011 7:10 pm

Don't believe in resurrection

then read between my tears

and you'll see God brought me back

'cause I was dead for years...



I killed myself along the way to the here and now

I did a few more things than I know You'd allow

I got twisted, broken, and I don't know how

but as I stand here before You, Lord, to Thee I vow...

that never will I ever die the way I used to die

and whenever my forever comes You'll carry me on high

Dead man reeling from revealing all the scars in his mind

He's concealing the real feeling that he's trying to find

I blew it and I knew it when I tried to stand alone

and it's true that without You, then I never would have grown

because what I did as a kid, it didn't banish me to hell

'cause if it did, God forbid, I'd have no stories to tell

But when I fell, let me tell You, there was nowhere to land

and in the cell where I did dwell is when I noticed Your hand

I fetched my pen and sketched right then getting lifted from that hole

Your outstretched arms etched into my mind, my heart, my soul

You told me that You'd hold me and You'd never let me go

a heart cold did now behold someone willing to bestow

an unconditional proposition, all You wanted was my love

My submission was my admission of what I always dreamed of

That someone, anyone, would love me just for me

now Your Son's undone my wrongs, and His blood has set me free

I was strange, slightly deranged, I didn't know where I was going

but my life changed, got rearranged as Your mercy started showing

A mind blocked, a heart locked, one once easily enticed

does now walk, does now talk, as a child of Christ

Within my sight a life so bright, and Your Word I will spread

and I'll write about the Light that has raised me from the dead
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PostSubject: Re: The resurrection of me   The resurrection of me EmptyMon Oct 17, 2011 10:05 pm

Awesome. Yet again, I'm impressed. Love your message of redemption. Especially love the following lines:

Your outstretched arms etched into my mind, my heart, my soul

You told me that You'd hold me and You'd never let me go

That someone, anyone, would love me just for me

now Your Son's undone my wrongs, and His blood has set me free
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PostSubject: Re: The resurrection of me   The resurrection of me EmptyMon Oct 17, 2011 10:25 pm

Don't believe in resurrection

then read between my tear
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............................Brilliant, yer a very talented it lyricist. I could put these lines to a serious beat...would make an amazing song. I love the way you rhyme within the rhyme...I do that quite a bit in my rap. Thanks for sharing...........all glory to the Father!
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PostSubject: Re: The resurrection of me   The resurrection of me EmptyTue Oct 18, 2011 12:28 am

A lot of good food for thought and mind you all food doesn't taste good but this is a taste of honey, I love the message it's one I needed, I'm still wrestling with some issues and appreciate this very much. A message much needed to be heard!
Thank you for sharing a truly inspired and insightful glimpse of your heart.
God Bless you.
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PostSubject: Re: The resurrection of me   The resurrection of me EmptyTue Oct 18, 2011 10:34 am

Right on! I appreciate each and every one of you, and I'm truly glad in my heart that God directed me to this site. I enjoy readin' your poems, I enjoy puttin' mine out there for you, and I absolutely enjoy everyone's sincerity towards the Lord. It's a beautiful thing to witness more and more people joining and writing. To me, writing is an amazing way God's given me to express myself and my life. Past, present and future. Dark, light and bright. My life is an open book, as they say, and it wouldn't be as special were all of you not in it. Word.
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