rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: The resurrection of me Mon Oct 17, 2011 7:10 pm | |
| Don't believe in resurrection
then read between my tears
and you'll see God brought me back
'cause I was dead for years...
I killed myself along the way to the here and now
I did a few more things than I know You'd allow
I got twisted, broken, and I don't know how
but as I stand here before You, Lord, to Thee I vow...
that never will I ever die the way I used to die
and whenever my forever comes You'll carry me on high
Dead man reeling from revealing all the scars in his mind
He's concealing the real feeling that he's trying to find
I blew it and I knew it when I tried to stand alone
and it's true that without You, then I never would have grown
because what I did as a kid, it didn't banish me to hell
'cause if it did, God forbid, I'd have no stories to tell
But when I fell, let me tell You, there was nowhere to land
and in the cell where I did dwell is when I noticed Your hand
I fetched my pen and sketched right then getting lifted from that hole
Your outstretched arms etched into my mind, my heart, my soul
You told me that You'd hold me and You'd never let me go
a heart cold did now behold someone willing to bestow
an unconditional proposition, all You wanted was my love
My submission was my admission of what I always dreamed of
That someone, anyone, would love me just for me
now Your Son's undone my wrongs, and His blood has set me free
I was strange, slightly deranged, I didn't know where I was going
but my life changed, got rearranged as Your mercy started showing
A mind blocked, a heart locked, one once easily enticed
does now walk, does now talk, as a child of Christ
Within my sight a life so bright, and Your Word I will spread
and I'll write about the Light that has raised me from the dead |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: The resurrection of me Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:05 pm | |
| Awesome. Yet again, I'm impressed. Love your message of redemption. Especially love the following lines:
Your outstretched arms etched into my mind, my heart, my soul
You told me that You'd hold me and You'd never let me go
That someone, anyone, would love me just for me
now Your Son's undone my wrongs, and His blood has set me free |
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worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: The resurrection of me Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:25 pm | |
| Don't believe in resurrection
then read between my tears
............................Brilliant, yer a very talented it lyricist. I could put these lines to a serious beat...would make an amazing song. I love the way you rhyme within the rhyme...I do that quite a bit in my rap. Thanks for sharing...........all glory to the Father! |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: The resurrection of me Tue Oct 18, 2011 12:28 am | |
| A lot of good food for thought and mind you all food doesn't taste good but this is a taste of honey, I love the message it's one I needed, I'm still wrestling with some issues and appreciate this very much. A message much needed to be heard! Thank you for sharing a truly inspired and insightful glimpse of your heart. God Bless you. |
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: The resurrection of me Tue Oct 18, 2011 10:34 am | |
| Right on! I appreciate each and every one of you, and I'm truly glad in my heart that God directed me to this site. I enjoy readin' your poems, I enjoy puttin' mine out there for you, and I absolutely enjoy everyone's sincerity towards the Lord. It's a beautiful thing to witness more and more people joining and writing. To me, writing is an amazing way God's given me to express myself and my life. Past, present and future. Dark, light and bright. My life is an open book, as they say, and it wouldn't be as special were all of you not in it. Word. |
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