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PostSubject: Confusion   Confusion EmptyThu Oct 20, 2011 9:51 am

The more I travel and the more I see,
It seems that the more confused I be.
People want this but they don't want that,
Confused they are as a matter of fact.

I can't make up my mind on what I need to do,
Too much decision making, makes me feel so blue.
If I'm wrong or even if I'm right,
I lay awake in the nighttime, struggleing with the fight.

Where do I go, or what do I say,
Will they really like me, or send me away?
If I make a stand, will it be worth the while?
What really happens if I go the extra mile?

So I keep it all simple, I keep it all straight
I don't lose my rest, I don't stay up late.
To worry is wrong, God says it's a sin,
I lay it all upon the alter, and simply trust Him
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PostSubject: Re: Confusion   Confusion EmptyThu Oct 20, 2011 10:25 am

Word. The most simple thing to do is just give it to God, yet I often find myself thinkin' I control certain events. I don't. Don't even know why I think I do. I can stress about it, or smile about it, and either way it's gonna turn out the way God wants it to. Great poem. No doubt.
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PostSubject: Re: Confusion   Confusion EmptyThu Oct 20, 2011 10:55 am

Love the message and great writing. Nice job.
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PostSubject: Re: Confusion   Confusion EmptySun Oct 23, 2011 1:31 pm

"The more I travel and the more I see,
It seems that the more confused I be.
People want this but they don't want that,
Confused they are as a matter of fact."
Gotta take the good with the bad & ugly sometimes.
Romans 8:28
Tells us it's all good for those who trust in the Lord.
God Bless.
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PostSubject: Re: Confusion   Confusion EmptySun Oct 23, 2011 1:52 pm

If the devil tries to confuse us he wins. I often give it to God and then think "He is so busy, let me take it back and do it myself". When I finally come to myself, I realize God is so good all I have to do is just do what he wants me to, not what I want to do. However, I don't really much care what others think about me, its what God thinks and what I think about me that matters. I just try to do what God says is right and then its all good!
By the way, it really is a great poem.
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PostSubject: Re: Confusion   Confusion EmptySun Oct 23, 2011 2:53 pm

Very good message for everyone. Thank you for sharing with us. Will be watching for more from you. :-)
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PostSubject: Re: Confusion   Confusion EmptyMon Dec 26, 2011 1:01 am

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