Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Where Love Once Lived Thu Oct 20, 2011 8:47 pm | |
| I saw a house where love once lived The moment I saw it I knew. And I could tell from your eyes That you knew it too. We stepped up on the front porch Which was so long and wide And since the front door swung open We were able to go inside. Although it had been many a year Since inhabitants had lived therein I knew that love and joy The heart of this house had been. The hallway seemed so familiar As did the stairway to the floor above As I continued my exploration I felt so surrounded by love. How strange that this house so empty Was not tattered and torn But seemed to be just lived in And no more than normally worn. It was then when I awakened And knew it had been a dream For the house I had been visiting So comforting, cozy and warm Was the house of my childhood, The house where I was born. Thena |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Where Love Once Lived Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:36 pm | |
| That's cool. What an awesome dream. I love your narrative poems, they never fail to impress me. |
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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Re: Where Love Once Lived Fri Oct 21, 2011 12:33 am | |
| Awesome dream. Hardly ever remember mine in such detail. God bless Jan P |
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: Where Love Once Lived Fri Oct 21, 2011 9:57 am | |
| Beautiful! I usually only remember the crazy dreams I have, for some reason, and whereas I lived in literally a hundred places growin' up, I'm gonna try and hitch-hike in your dream and hopefully think about your childhood house one of these nights. |
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