Dave Tittle APPRENTICE (6-25 posts)
Posts : 13 Age : 67 Join date : 2011-08-15 Location : Worcester county, ma,
| Subject: Because You live Fri Aug 19, 2011 6:15 pm | |
| JESUS TAKES MY HAND BUT, I DON’T FEEL HIS TOUCH MY SOULS’ DYING INSIDE, STILL, HE LOVES ME SO MUCH I SPEAK OUT IN MY DARKNESS, TO SEE IF HE’S THERE WHEN I DON’T GET AN ANSWER, I THINK, HE DOESN’T CARE ( PRE-CHORUS ) BUT, HIS PRESENCE IS HERE ALL AROUND ME IT’S ALL UP TO ME TO REACH OUT TO OPEN MY HEART TO THIS SAVIOR AND LEARN, WHAT TRUE LOVE’S ABOUT ( PRE-CHORUS PART 2 ) I WANT YOU TO KNOW BUT, YOU’VE ALREADY KNOWN I NEED YOU TO SEE BUT, YOU’VE ALREADY SEEN I WANT YOU TO HEAR BUT, YOU’VE ALREADY HEARD I WANT YOU TO LIVE BUT YOU ALREADY LIVE ( CHORUS) YOU KNOW EVERYTHING…YOU SEE EVERYTHING…YOU HEAR EVERYTHING BECAUSE YOU LIVE!
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christianonfire7 PENCIL PUSHER (26-50 posts)
Posts : 49 Join date : 2011-08-13
| Subject: Re: Because You live Sat Aug 20, 2011 12:25 pm | |
| Amen! I don't think you need to have this all in caps unless it tries to impact that it's more of a louder song, like rape or rock often is, but even still it being in caps doesn't seem really necessary. But nevertheless this is a great message. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Because You live Sat Aug 20, 2011 1:19 pm | |
| You have an awesome message in this lyric. I loved it. Keep writing! |
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