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rhymarhyma
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PostSubject: The end of the show   The end of the show EmptyTue Oct 25, 2011 1:32 pm

Time speeds ahead, when time used to stand still
and I can't catch time when I'm runnin' uphill
and I can't make up time that I threw away
The only time I have is this moment, this day
I've got time to die or I've got time to grow
'cause when the music fades...it's the end of the show

I have to remember that yesterday's gone
and I can't forget I might not see another dawn
But it seems to me, and this is just the way it seems
that if I'm happy right now, then I'm livin' my dreams
and why shouldn't I shine, why shouldn't I glow
'cause when the curtain falls...it's the end of the show

All my little babies, on earth no one gets put above you
I will love you forever, and forever I will love you
This life is but a moment and you only get one shot
but don't think for a moment that it's all that you've got
It doesn't matter where you're at in life, but where you're gonna go
'cause when the lights go out...it's the end of the show
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PostSubject: Re: The end of the show   The end of the show EmptyThu Oct 27, 2011 5:13 pm

So true. Love the self reflection.
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PostSubject: Re: The end of the show   The end of the show EmptyFri Oct 28, 2011 2:37 am

I like the first verse best I guess, it seems to me that time has speeded up as well. Its a great piece of work.
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