rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Mental suicide Tue Oct 25, 2011 1:42 pm | |
| Once upon a time, once upon a rhyme in a land so close yet very far away there lived a young man, who came up with a plan to catch tomorrow without living in today
He felt right from the start, and felt it in his heart that where he was today was just no good so he promised in a letter, that tomorrow would be better and he jumped from the rooftop where he stood
As he started falling, he heard a soft voice calling asking why he was so full of sorrow The young man could only say, that he hated yesterday so today he was jumping towards tomorrow
The soothing gentle voice, offered him a choice and stopped the man mid-way through his fall But to the voice's dismay, the young man simply turned away and refused to listen to the call
Though he eventually hit the ground, every day he walked around wondering why his body hadn't died and as tears rolled down his eyes, he would finally realize physical death beats mental-suicide
The voice would only say, "Just be grateful for today for the time you live is mine for you to borrow and should you change your mind, I'm not very hard to find; I am yesterday, today, and tomorrow" |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Mental suicide Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:04 pm | |
| The voice would only say, "Just be grateful for today for the time you live is mine for you to borrow and should you change your mind, I'm not very hard to find; I am yesterday, today, and tomorrow"
Awesome, that was moving. Love the heart you put into this one. |
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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Re: Mental suicide Fri Oct 28, 2011 2:45 am | |
| Powerful. I love the line "I am yesterday, today and tomorrow". I could feel the emotion. Great work. |
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