rhymarhyma
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 |  Subject: Mama Thu Oct 27, 2011 6:00 pm | |
| When the breeze whispers by on a sunny afternoon
and high upon that breeze is a little red balloon
That's me saying "I love you" from the other side of the moon
I'm going away now, but I'll see you real soon |
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Lora
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| | Subject: Re: Mama Thu Oct 27, 2011 6:05 pm | |
| Very sweet. Love the wistful tone, it made me a little misty. |
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cleo574
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| | Subject: Re: Mama Thu Oct 27, 2011 11:01 pm | |
| Strange, but it made me think someone was dying. Great word usage. |
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rhymarhyma
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| | Subject: Re: Mama Fri Oct 28, 2011 8:57 am | |
| Right on! That was about my mom, who passed on in '94. One day I saw a balloon bouncing high in the sky, and that's what I came away with. |
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