cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Past Life Fri Nov 04, 2011 6:56 am | |
| PAST LIFE
By Jan Phillips
Sometimes when you spend too much time in the past You begin to wonder if life is gonna last. We should learn from time gone by Not to go back and live that lie.
Today and tomorrow is really what counts We should enjoy every last ounce We can’t change what’s gone by Why do we continually try?
We act like if we don’t cling to our past That we won’t have anything that lasts If we live for today and tomorrow too We won’t be so down and blue.
I like to live today as if I knew God was due any time, how about you? When I stand before God in the judgment line I’ll say “they took Jesus’ life so I gave you mine”.
No matter what you say or do You have to know Jesus died for you. So give your past life a rest, And just live now to do your best.
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: Past Life Fri Nov 04, 2011 9:48 am | |
| Love it. Word. You always have great messages in neat little packages. No doubt. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Past Life Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:11 pm | |
| Wow! I think that' s my favorite poem of yours so far, both for the writing and the message. Living in the past can devastate one's life and you are so right. Being bitter and worrying over what happened in the past can cause one to miss out on the present.
I like to live today as if I knew God was due any time, how about you? When I stand before God in the judgment line I’ll say “they took Jesus’ life so I gave you mine”.
P.S. I think I found a typo in line four. Thought you might like to know:
Not to go back and live that lie. |
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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Re: Past Life Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:16 pm | |
| Thank you Miss Lora. I have changed it. I appreciate your catching that. Glad you liked this one. |
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