silverglass PENCIL PUSHER (26-50 posts)
Posts : 37 Age : 71 Join date : 2011-10-06 Location : Barrington,Rhode Island
| Subject: Enacirruh! Thu Oct 13, 2011 6:05 pm | |
| Wind-borne of cardinal points, from moment to moment newly born
Like a warm spring apache I move on with no regrets, I am omnipotent!
Earth and sky I make one with tiger tail, terror and pain and worry and drain, I am unstoppable!
Billowing spirits and leeward sprites, I work them together in harmonious flow No ill will from these friends I owe, as they most willing are working my woe!
High and low this season I go and many a kind will follow me home
Terror below as surely I go, my infamous name by many well known Ruin behind I am eager to grow, and make my mark of horror, Ahoy!
From twilight to dawn with nature create remarkable fate My favor, with fever increases, the weather, the warmer, the better!
Full Luna arise, most loyal companion that ever complies, by breaking the borders and makers of mud, it surely advises, beware!
Ahoy! Ahoy! I am coming abroad, to many a wonder and many a woe!
I sow my woe with careless adieu, mindlessly moving with impending doom!
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Enacirruh! Thu Oct 13, 2011 6:39 pm | |
| I felt the mighty ocean in that one. Awesome work. You write very well. You have a great gift. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Enacirruh! Fri Oct 14, 2011 3:35 am | |
| Incrediblely awesome, powerful imagery! Great piece!
" Ahoy! Ahoy! I am coming abroad, to many a wonder and many a woe!
I sow my woe with careless adieu, mindlessly moving with impending doom!"
Not "coming" though...ever present, discernment is key leaning on one's own understanding...futile, ineffective, friends or foes? Only God truly knows.
Overall very well written thought provoking for sure ! God Bless.
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Enacirruh! Sun Nov 20, 2011 3:19 pm | |
| Hurricane ? Enacirruh... Glad you're back!
God Bless. |
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