cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: When I Was Young Sun Nov 20, 2011 4:16 pm | |
| By Jan Phillips
There was a time when I was young and wild
Even though I was already God’s child.
I was lost in the world of sin
God kept knocking, but I wouldn’t let him in.
I thought I had plenty of time to redeem myself
So I just put God upon a shelf
I went upon my merry way
Sinning constantly every day.
I thought I was having lots of fun
But really I was having none
I really wanted to live it up
So I drank from every cup.
There was nothing I didn’t try
But God I did deny
He still loved me even then
He wanted me back in his arms again.
When I was close to a suicide death
He made me catch my breath
Now I am His for good or bad
“Lord, I sure am glad.” |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: When I Was Young Sun Nov 20, 2011 5:02 pm | |
| Wow, powerful message. I could really feel your heart in that one. Great work. I especially like the little last line expressing your relief and thankfulness. Great ending. |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: When I Was Young Sun Nov 20, 2011 6:20 pm | |
| We are all so glad and so thankful that you are a child of God willing to share your life and story with us all. |
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