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THelvig
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THelvig

Posts : 18
Age : 43
Join date : 2011-08-25

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PostSubject: Dear God   Dear God EmptyThu Aug 25, 2011 5:35 pm
Bathe me,
Save me,
Crave my soul...
Fill me,
Will me,
Make me whole...
See me,
Free me,
Hear my cries...
Hold me,
Mold me,
Dry my eyes...
Lift me,
Gift me,
With Your grace...
Love me,
Hug me,
Show Your face...
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Lora
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Lora

Posts : 5907
Age : 53
Join date : 2011-07-26
Location : Southern CA

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PostSubject: Re: Dear God   Dear God EmptyThu Aug 25, 2011 6:59 pm
Hello THelvig,
Welcome to Christian Creative Writers. I am so glad you joined us. For such a thrifty use of words, you say so much. This is some awesome work. I especially like the beat. Nice work. May God Bless you greatly.
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cindergirl6
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cindergirl6

Posts : 47
Age : 40
Join date : 2011-08-11
Location : Central Florida

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PostSubject: Re: Dear God   Dear God EmptyFri Aug 26, 2011 4:53 am
Oh wow, love this. Sometimes poetry is prayer and prayer is poetry. That is why I love this topic.
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