rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Abandoned Sun Dec 04, 2011 9:06 pm | |
| I had to abandon myself, to know what it feels to be wanted
and abandon this world, where every memory is haunted
Shake the darkness that enveloped my mind
and do away with rainy days that always kept me confined
I had to release myself, that I might be held
in the arms of my Creator, from whom I once rebelled
I left my Lord for the sins of worldly pleasures
before realizing the value of Heaven's treasures
I had to lose myself, so that I would be found
Lonely cries in the night are a deafening sound
The echo of the world as it tears me apart
stopped ringing to angel's singing as I gave dear God my heart
I had to empty myself, to truly be full
Destroy the cunning, stealthy wolf and dress myself in wool
One hundred sheep, but one strays and pays the cost
The Shepherd leaves the ninety-nine to find the one that is lost
I had to surrender myself, so I could finally be free
Free to be the me that God wants me to be
I await my final sleep, the comfort of the grave
when the world no longer makes me weep...and I'm no longer its slave |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Abandoned Sun Dec 04, 2011 9:25 pm | |
| "The Shepherd leaves the ninety-nine to find the one that is lost"
And all the village rejoices at it's return!!
God Bless.
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Abandoned Mon Dec 05, 2011 7:58 pm | |
| I love your style. It is unique, draws me in, and refuses to let me go.
I had to lose myself, so that I would be found
Lonely cries in the night are a deafening sound
The echo of the world as it tears me apart
stopped ringing to angel's singing as I gave dear God my heart
I had to empty myself, to truly be full
Destroy the cunning, stealthy wolf and dress myself in wool
One hundred sheep, but one strays and pays the cost
The Shepherd leaves the ninety-nine to find the one that is lost |
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worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: Abandoned Thu Dec 08, 2011 1:02 pm | |
| Awesome as per usual. I'm a slave for the one who conquered the grave! Not a slave to this world. |
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