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worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: No Resistance Wed Dec 07, 2011 8:58 pm | |
| verse 1
Disobedient from the start, God's will just ripped apart Self will and selfishness and an ugly sinful heart doin' what I like, what I feel, what brings pleasure to me By what I did, or what I do is HE measurin' me So much sin stacked up, man I'm filled to bursting Spiritual dehydration, it's for God's peace I'm thirsting And hurtin', for certain, drowning in pain Jesus is the water so I beg for the rain Let me explain, man, I lived for myself And broad was my path, I was headed to hell Don't dwell on the past, or try to rewind it Cause narrow is the gate but I'm determined to find it
chorus
I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant
verse 2 HE never said it would be easy, but HE'd always be there But so many false prophets, it's best to beware And if I'm not careful I'll be following idols Jesus is the only one that earned that title But HE paid that price, the Father loves us so much The spirit's touch will guide you if you follow the nudge But garbage in, garbage out watch yer surroundings But if you breath in the word brother you'll be astounded That you found all yer hardship was a pathway to peace And if you fill yourself with light, the devil has to release And cease and desist, yeah his influence was strong But if you take the time to notice God was there all along
chorus
I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant
verse 3
If you except the Lord, the devil will attack But God's grace will show you yer on the right track And yer ego will tell you an idea that seems proof But God's will and the Word contains the whole truth The answer ain't in man, or in any religion Left or right of the cross, it's your decision Accept no division., you can only serve one master Your worship, service and praise is what God's really after Total devotion, humility, and love HE don't want you to suffer, but to rise up above Don't mean life is easy, or even all that great But if heaven is the fate, then it's worth the wait
chorus
I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant
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| | | Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: No Resistance Wed Dec 07, 2011 11:05 pm | |
| Love the way you sang the chorus, it was a surprise. I love your slower tempo, softer songs. This one had a kind of mystical sounding background sound to it that I liked, too, if that makes any sense. Vocally, sometimes it feels as though you're holding back a bit, and your voice sounds best in it's tenor range. Although, I think you sounded great, especially in the chorus, I'd say, don't be afraid to let it go a little more and express the feeling you have in the music. Great work, I can tell you put a lot of work into this one, loved it. |
| | | worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: No Resistance Wed Dec 07, 2011 11:11 pm | |
| I kinda have to hold back. I don't have a true studio. I am in my room and I have 15 roommates :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: But I do appreciate yer feedback. Plus I don't feel like I'm a good singer, wish I had someone to work with, but I do give it my all. Joyful noise and all.
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| | | Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: No Resistance Wed Dec 07, 2011 11:23 pm | |
| 15 ROOMMATES!!! Oh my, that aught to be interesting. We do what we gotta do, though. I'm certain the Lord has big plans for you. You have a great big heart, so full of the love that this world starves for. I can hear improvement in your voice each time you record a new song. This one is the best so far, I think. It's exciting to watch you grow and mature in the art that you love so much. Your lyrics rock, too, or should I say rap? |
| | | worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: No Resistance Wed Dec 07, 2011 11:26 pm | |
| No, rock is in my heart. I just want to play the background for the one true rockstar, Jesus. |
| | | oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: No Resistance Thu Dec 08, 2011 12:41 am | |
| Loved this one too and both titles too !! This a bit slower tempo than "oh no", nice change up. Your heart runs deep in the flow bro', so glad you share.
God Bless
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| | | worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: No Resistance Thu Dec 08, 2011 12:45 am | |
| So grateful you enjoy. If it speaks to even one person it is worth the time to produce it. All glory to the Father. |
| | | oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: No Resistance Thu Dec 08, 2011 1:05 am | |
| Everything you post speaks to me...from replies, to music, to things the Lord opens your eyes to, learn much from the Spirit speaking through you. Your sincerity and passion for the Lord always shines through. Hey we're gonna struggle, but hand it over to Jesus and He can work wonders in our lives' through it, from out of it. Your prayers for us through your songs help to build us up, give us hope, knowing full well that you are endurings trials while all at once sharing of yourself...great gifts.
God Bless. |
| | | worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: No Resistance Thu Dec 08, 2011 12:47 pm | |
| Thank you brother. The encouragement is very helpful. I trust in the spirit to guide. |
| | | srfoust NEW KID ON THE BLOCK (0-5 Posts)
Posts : 5 Join date : 2011-09-30
| Subject: Re: No Resistance Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:35 pm | |
| Interesting style. Kind of a rap and psychedelic rock cross. I do like your lyrics. It is really interesting how tunes are inspired and created, and then how they turn out. |
| | | worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: No Resistance Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:38 pm | |
| Thank you. It is HE in me that you hear.
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| Subject: Re: No Resistance Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:47 pm | |
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