MUSHROOMS

What's the outcome of this day
Did it really make it's mark
Upon a world so closed to Him
That they prefer life in the dark
Like mushrooms thriving in the gloom
They're fed a load of tasty dung
Which stops them looking for the light
That shines from what The Saviours done.

We're the carriers of this light
Through us He's supposed to shine
Easter's so familiar
The message sadly fades with time
Let us take His sacrifice
To live the victory that He's won
Pick those mushrooms from their grave
And bathe them in the glorious Son.

This puts me to shame and bows my head,
a similar message to mine,
but much better said.
In less words at that,
I stand corrected,
my work will stand,
as a contrast...
a message,
much needed,
redirected.



thanks for sharing,
GOD BLESS!!

Read this quite a few times...really love this metaphor and message.
It is your best yet in my humble opinion but I sincerely feel, it is only the beginning.

Much Love Brother,
Peace be with you.

oneagleswings wrote:

This puts me to shame and bows my head,
a similar message to mine,
but much better said.
In less words at that,
I stand corrected,
my work will stand,
as a contrast...
a message,
much needed,
redirected.



thanks for sharing,
GOD BLESS!!

I wholeheartedly disagree! Both works are in completely different styles. Although there is a similar subject discussed, there is little else that can be compared. They are both excellent works within their own individual style.