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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: ENOUGH Sat Dec 17, 2011 6:26 am | |
| These are the eyes you gave me I took them to places saw things I wished I hadn't
You took away my sins renewed my heart mended a vessel that was cracked it's no mistake... you left these eyes intact
Crosses around necks the size of anchors Big Faith? Big Belief? Bigger is better?!
Sportin' it like an accessory when every other word out of their mouths' is blasphemy it's even common to be said on t.v.
Since when is...
God
a seven letter word?!
i must confess in my ignorance i'd done it too
before being saved before i knew You
can't be a hypocrite not when the Truth lives in me
truly i say.. yes yes i did
no no i no longer do
now... it's like nails across a chalkboard
a steam whistle right... in my face
a locomotive's air horn that freezes my soul right in it's tracks
a primal scream from a place so deep inside...
it hurts my heart! it hurts my mind!
there's just no where to hide!
but anger is wrong
and...
"vengeance is thine"
in a living heart...
eyes
and ears
still
can't help
but
bleed tears
Peace, in Truth
"...I did not come to bring peace...but a sword" Matthew 10:34
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: ENOUGH Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:14 am | |
| I reread several times. Love the message and it starts off strong too.
These are the eyes you gave me I took them to places saw things I wished I hadn't
I love the way you speak of Big Faith? Big Belief? Bigger is better?!
And then write the following in a smaller font: in a living heart...
eyes
and ears
bleed tears
Last edited by Lora on Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:31 am; edited 2 times in total |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: ENOUGH Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:17 am | |
| Still reading this one over and over.
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: ENOUGH Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:43 am | |
| I was thinking the other night about how we can't "unsee" or "unhear" things but God can take the worst of it and use it for good as we share what we have learned with others.
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: ENOUGH Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:55 am | |
| - Thena wrote:
- I was thinking the other night about how we can't "unsee" or "unhear" things but
God can take the worst of it and use it for good as we share what we have learned with others.
So true, so true. When we've experienced it, then we can truly understand and help others in their pain. |
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vinedresser WORDSMITH (251-300 posts)
Posts : 259 Age : 68 Join date : 2011-10-10 Location : Arkansas
| Subject: Re: ENOUGH Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:17 pm | |
| It broke over me like a wave in the ocean. I cannot deny the truth of it nor the remorse of the the results. A powerful work of the word. From a preacher, "THAT WILL PREACH" |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: ENOUGH Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:25 pm | |
| did i sound like a preacher...oops. just a guy, who got a second chance he didn't deserve.
Thanks for reading and replying, God Bless |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: ENOUGH Sat Dec 17, 2011 5:22 pm | |
| Yes, you hit the nail right on the head. That's exactly how it feels now!
now... it's like nails across a chalkboard
a steam whistle right... in my face
a locomotive's air horn that freezes my soul right in it's tracks
a primal scream from a place so deep inside... |
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