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PostSubject: ENOUGH    ENOUGH  EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 6:26 am




These are the eyes
you gave me
I took them to places
saw things
I wished I hadn't

You took away my sins
renewed my heart
mended a vessel
that was cracked
it's no mistake...
you left these eyes
intact

Crosses around necks
the size of anchors
Big Faith?
Big Belief?
Bigger is better?!

Sportin' it
like an accessory
when every other word
out of their mouths'
is blasphemy
it's even common to be said
on t.v.


Since when
is...

God

a seven letter word?!

i must confess
in my ignorance
i'd done it too

before being saved
before i knew You

can't be a hypocrite
not when
the Truth lives in me

truly i say..
yes
yes
i did

no
no
i no longer do

now...
it's like nails
across a chalkboard

a steam whistle
right...
in my face

a locomotive's
air horn
that freezes my soul
right in it's tracks

a primal scream
from a place
so deep inside...

it hurts my heart!
it hurts my mind!

there's just no where to hide!

but anger is wrong

and...

"vengeance
is thine"


in a living heart...

eyes

and ears

still

can't help

but

bleed tears




Peace,

in
Truth





"...I did not come to bring peace...but a sword"
Matthew 10:34






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PostSubject: Re: ENOUGH    ENOUGH  EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 11:14 am

I reread several times. Love the message and it starts off strong too.

These are the eyes
you gave me
I took them to places
saw things
I wished I hadn't

I love the way you speak of
Big Faith?
Big Belief?
Bigger is better?!

And then write the following in a smaller font:
in a living heart...

eyes

and ears

bleed tears


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PostSubject: Re: ENOUGH    ENOUGH  EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 11:17 am

Still reading this one over and over.



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PostSubject: Re: ENOUGH    ENOUGH  EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 11:43 am

I was thinking the other night about how we can't "unsee" or "unhear" things but
God can take the worst of it and use it for good as we share what we have learned with others.

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PostSubject: Re: ENOUGH    ENOUGH  EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 11:55 am

Thena wrote:
I was thinking the other night about how we can't "unsee" or "unhear" things but
God can take the worst of it and use it for good as we share what we have learned with others.

So true, so true. When we've experienced it, then we can truly understand and help others in their pain.
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PostSubject: Re: ENOUGH    ENOUGH  EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 1:17 pm

It broke over me like a wave in the ocean. I cannot deny the truth of it nor the remorse of the the results. A powerful work of the word. From a preacher, "THAT WILL PREACH"
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PostSubject: Re: ENOUGH    ENOUGH  EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 1:25 pm

did i sound like a preacher...oops.
just a guy, who got a second chance
he didn't deserve.

Thanks for reading and replying,
God Bless
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PostSubject: Re: ENOUGH    ENOUGH  EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 5:22 pm

Yes, you hit the nail right on the head. That's exactly how it feels now!

now...
it's like nails
across a chalkboard

a steam whistle
right...
in my face

a locomotive's
air horn
that freezes my soul
right in it's tracks

a primal scream
from a place
so deep inside...
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