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PostSubject: This Morning   This Morning EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 1:40 pm

Got out of bed, scratched a little at my beard
Into the kitchen for a a cup of joe, found my easy chair
Turned on the tube to start the day, nothing really to see
Planned on makin it a lazy day, after all it belonged to me

What I saw on the screen suddenly caught my eye
Made me to sit up straight and ask myself why
Doesn't somebody do something about all that mess
Of war and of famine and all of the rest

Then God spoke to my heart he took me to my knees
When He reminded my spirit of One at Calvery
He told me that this was the result of mankind
Whose heart had gone cold, and this was the sign

Of a time that was fast coming to an end
And all that I saw He would suspend
That is chances that I miss to do do His work today
I am responsible for and oh by the way

What I don't do He has prepared
Someone that is willing who won't mind to share
That which they have how little it may be
So one may be helped, and that you will see

Is the Gospel in action, I MUST do my part
To share the good news, He has placed in my heart
My days are never idle, for Him I must quest
To find one that is in need, and in Him, there is my rest.
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PostSubject: Re: This Morning   This Morning EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 1:43 pm

Beautifully written and well expressed...
really felt the heart in this.

God Bless
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PostSubject: Re: This Morning   This Morning EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 1:47 pm

What a great message in this.
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PostSubject: Re: This Morning   This Morning EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 2:23 pm

Absolutely great message. No doubt.
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PostSubject: Re: This Morning   This Morning EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 2:35 pm

Especially loved the last stanza:

Is the Gospel in action, I MUST do my part
To share the good news, He has placed in my heart
My days are never idle, for Him I must quest
To find one that is in need, and in Him, there is my rest.
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PostSubject: Re: This Morning   This Morning EmptySun Dec 18, 2011 5:24 am

Everyone is so kind to this old boy from Arkansas. My thank you to the support, desire, and determinaltion of such a needed outlet. There are so many hearts crying out and not knowing how to let it out. My prayer is rich and abundant blessing to the laborors.
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PostSubject: Re: This Morning   This Morning EmptySun Dec 18, 2011 5:32 am

You are a blessing !


God Bless you!!
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PostSubject: Re: This Morning   This Morning EmptySun Dec 18, 2011 6:55 am



Would love to hear you rap that one, Kinda had a cool rhythm.
Scott
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PostSubject: Re: This Morning   This Morning EmptySun Dec 18, 2011 3:55 pm

Or, better yet, put it in a slam. Just sayin'. But, it's not for everyone. I think it's beautiful just the way it stands too.
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