rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Loss Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:49 pm | |
| When you finally fall down
one truth remains true
You are judged by us still living
by how we remember you...
The measure of a man
isn't too hard to find
It's by what they leave behind
in the depths of our mind
It's by all of the memories
of the days, months or years
and whatever lies behind
all of the farewell tears
They can be tears of fears
They can be tears of violence
Tears that scream loudly
and leave echoes of silence
They can be tears of joy
tears of longing, tears of sorrow
Tears that whisper softly
of a distant tomorrow
We have so many reasons
that make our teardrops drop
whether we shed just one
or they never, ever stop
Just know in your heart
that the tears in my mind
flow because I know
angels are hard to find
You didn't fall down
you spread your wings and you flew
Graceful, strong and proud
like I'll remember you...
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Loss Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:51 pm | |
| My new favorite of yours! |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Loss Sat Dec 17, 2011 3:06 pm | |
| So beautiful.
You didn't fall down
You spread your wings and you flew
Graceful, strong and proud
like I'll remember you... |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Loss Sat Dec 17, 2011 5:20 pm | |
| ahhh... let me breathe this in...bro' you are like a rush of fresh air.
God Bless |
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: Loss Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:53 pm | |
| Thanks, guys. That was for my little brother's dad when he passed on. He was the closest thing to a dad that I ever had. A really good person. Word. |
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