rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Turned away Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:55 pm | |
| How would I feel, if day after day
I offered my son my love...but he just turned away?
Or if my daughter was lost, and I tried showing her the way
and I said "Just follow my voice"...but she just turned away
What if my child's heart was broken, and rotting in decay
and I offered consolation...but my child turned away
What if my son convinced his sister that they didn't have to obey
and together the two of them...both just turned away
Some of my children will listen to me, while others will go astray
but I will never give up on the one's that turn away
I grew up with my Lord, but then I didn't want to stay
and my Father waited patiently...'til I came back his way |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Turned away Sat Dec 17, 2011 3:02 pm | |
| Wonderful...ok, new favorite ... |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Turned away Sat Dec 17, 2011 3:32 pm | |
| Some awesome work, love the message. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Turned away Sat Dec 17, 2011 6:05 pm | |
| great message...makes me think about many things at once. things i hadn't thought about in a really long time.
Peace. |
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