rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Revolt Sat Dec 17, 2011 3:30 pm | |
| Wanna see the world become all you've dreamed of?
Start a revolution, a revolution of love
Love somebody, anybody, everybody needs love
Love someone, anyone, everyone you think of
Every person that we come across, all that come our way
Tell 'em that we love 'em, try and show 'em every day
The butcher, the baker, the candlestick maker
the Christian, the Jew, the Muslim, the Quaker
I love you as you are and I wish you could see
that I want you to love me back, to love me just for me
Wanna see love around the world increase?
Start a revolution, a revolution of peace
Only we can make it sunny, only we can make it gray
Only we can make the feelings that we're feeling today
I will not bend to your attack, and no you will not convert me
You can mock me, you can knock me, but you never will hurt me
It's up to me to keep composure, up to me to keep control
and God truly gives me peace, within my mind, my heart, my soul
Come at me verbally or physically, take your best crack
Peace is a choice and I choose not to attack you back
Wanna see peace amongst every girl and boy?
Start a revolution, a revolution of joy
Get a "B" on your report card? Hey, that's better than a "C"
Get a "C" on your report card? Hey, that's better than a "D"
Don't stress it, child, you'll pass the next test
Just know that we love you and we know you did your best
No time for scolding, no time for strife
Let's go out and celebrate, celebrate life
Life is short, too short, and we should enjoy every minute
and life wouldn't be as great without all our angels in it
Wanna see joy within a worldwide scope
Start a revolution, a revolution of hope
The downtrodden have forgotten that life is grand
We need to open their eyes, we need to give 'em a hand
The oppressed are stressed that it's the end of the road
We have to lift 'em up, help 'em lighten their load
We've all fallen down, we've all been quite low
We've all, at different times, had nowhere to go
We're all special, and beautiful, and unique and great
Some have arrived early, but it's never too late
Wanna see hope rise and climb?
Start a revolution, a revolution of time
Let time be your money and you'll have lot's of it
Rich beyond your wildest dreams...man, you gotta love it
If my little one's want a video, maybe today's not the day
but I can take 'em to the park, where we can actually play
They wanna watch 'toons, I'll read 'em a book, instead
It's better from my heart, and so much better for their head
Children, especially, don't care what we drive or where we live
they just want our time, and we have plenty to give
People call me a dreamer, and hey, if that's the way it seems
then I'm starting a revolution, a revolution of dreams |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Revolt Sat Dec 17, 2011 3:42 pm | |
| Awesome work. Again, another sweet message. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Revolt Sat Dec 17, 2011 5:52 pm | |
| Loved it...awesome !! what i really like about your writing is...even when your works are lengthy there is not a single wasted or disposible word in it. when it gets to the end and i see the line on the bottom approaching it actually makes me sad.
God Bless |
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