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PostSubject: choices   choices EmptyMon Dec 19, 2011 7:20 am
Broken dreams
Shattered lives
Endless roads

Restless spirit
Nervous days
Maybe ways

Garbage bags of aspirations
Tossed aside
To the refuse pile of life

I allow myself to be

Ray of light
Brittle and thin
Timid in approach

Growing in strength
Intensity strong
Reaches to me

Fulness of joy
Brilliant love
Inescapable victory

I Am His!
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PostSubject: Re: choices   choices EmptyMon Dec 19, 2011 7:36 am
We all come by our eyes in different ways, I can't see through your's, you can't see through mine. whether it's a stygmatism, a patch over one, or squinting, the final destination is all that matters. People gathered from far and near to hear the Word...some by boat, some by donkey, some by foot, some over cobbled stones, some over sand, some over dirt.
Gathered at the same place.

"We need only wash our feet"

Love your heart!!
please keep writing!

God Bless
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PostSubject: Re: choices   choices EmptyMon Dec 19, 2011 9:47 am
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I Am His!

Love the way you ended it. That is what matters, isn't it.

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PostSubject: Re: choices   choices EmptyMon Dec 19, 2011 9:54 am
yes indeed miss thena!
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PostSubject: Re: choices   choices EmptyMon Dec 19, 2011 2:44 pm
Restless spirit
Nervous days
Maybe ways

This stanza really made it personable and relatable. Nice work. Love it.
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