BROTHERLY LOVE

Writing has been a hobby of mine, I have accrued some knowledge along the way
But what is knowing anything without one single protégé?
And this I have or yet I have found
When common sense deep within doth abound
I now realize and I clearly can see
At the times I was neglected, The feelings of me
Now I am hearing the cries that demand my reply
As I see that my legacy begins here with
Giving thanks due to God for much more than a gift
But the power with words, Both to heal and uplift
What a blessing it is and thank him up above
As I pass down what I possess through my brotherly love

AXIOM1988

This is a really good piece you have here, the message you set we right on and I liked how you flowed the rhyming in it. Nicely done.

The message is clearly written..and there is power in the written word. Ever noticed how music can speak to you, how the psalms lament your own soul....G-d Bless! Elohim Gahdol!