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 Will They Suspend My Poetic License?

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Thena
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PostSubject: Will They Suspend My Poetic License?   Will They Suspend My Poetic License? EmptyMon Dec 19, 2011 4:38 pm

Yesterday I made a rhyme
That had no rhythm to it
Even before I finished it
I knew for sure I blew it.

The day before I used a word
That I made up to fit
Now when I see the verse
My conscience takes a hit.

Sometimes I put in extra lines
To make things work my way
While other times I don't put in quotes
The things other people say.

Frequently, I write silly things
And other times you see
I find that I have to admit
I'm fraught with verbosity!

Once I wrote a lovely verse
I had remembered from a dream
But once I read it over
It made me want to scream.

I have been known to write and write
Until the day turns into night
But toss most of it away
When I read it at the break of day.

I don't always follow the rules
Forget sometimes the poet's tools
And since the critics that could incense-
Can they take away my poetic license?
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PostSubject: Re: Will They Suspend My Poetic License?   Will They Suspend My Poetic License? EmptyMon Dec 19, 2011 4:41 pm

What have i done...(groan)?
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PostSubject: Re: Will They Suspend My Poetic License?   Will They Suspend My Poetic License? EmptyMon Dec 19, 2011 4:43 pm

LOLOLOL....It's your fault!
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PostSubject: Re: Will They Suspend My Poetic License?   Will They Suspend My Poetic License? EmptyMon Dec 19, 2011 5:17 pm

ayyyy...
fuhg-edda-bouwd-id !!
have a nice hot cup o' KAW-FEE !!
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PostSubject: Re: Will They Suspend My Poetic License?   Will They Suspend My Poetic License? EmptyTue Dec 20, 2011 5:32 pm

LOL, hilarious!
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