hineimatov APPRENTICE (6-25 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 10 Age : 69 Join date : 2011-12-21 Location : Johannesburg, South Africa
| Subject: it was after the fire Wed Dec 21, 2011 9:12 pm | |
| It wasn't in blending myself with beauty in jaded white that my heart was first won... not in the white hot forge where iron sharpens iron that my hardness was undone It wasn't even the small voice my side of the bed one dark night... that ever so softly whispered 'daddy, I'm scared' and crept under my arm
It was when she was taken away that I first needed His Light |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: it was after the fire Wed Dec 21, 2011 10:50 pm | |
| Powerful, heart rending stuff. You packed a punch in one short verse. Nice work. |
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