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PostSubject: it was after the fire   it was after the fire EmptyWed Dec 21, 2011 9:12 pm

It wasn't in blending myself
with beauty in jaded white
that my heart was first won...
not in the white hot forge
where iron sharpens iron
that my hardness was undone
It wasn't even the small voice
my side of the bed one dark night...
that ever so softly whispered
'daddy, I'm scared'
and crept under my arm

It was when she was taken away

that I first needed His Light
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PostSubject: Re: it was after the fire   it was after the fire EmptyWed Dec 21, 2011 10:50 pm

Powerful, heart rending stuff. You packed a punch in one short verse. Nice work.
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