Versical PENCIL PUSHER (26-50 posts)
Posts : 50 Join date : 2011-10-11 Location : Wiltshire, England.
| Subject: YOU GAZE Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:38 am | |
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You gaze upon anothers walk Wishing you could emulate Everything they're seen to do Wow, amazing, they're so great Must be something that they eat Tuned in closely to their Lord I will never be like them Have to try and get on board.
Give up now and be yourself Unique creation, please be real Follow Him just like a sheep Then your gifts He will reveal You were made to touch the hearts Of those who watch your every move Keep your blinkered eyes on Him There is nothing left to prove.
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: YOU GAZE Sat Dec 24, 2011 1:42 pm | |
| "Blinking" serves manifold purposes, tears are in many ways, cleansing on many levels. We squint looking directly at the sun. we blink at the flash of a camera or when something gets in our eyes. Sometimes flinch, cower, before a surge forward. Oncoming high-beam headlights are blinding in pitch black night, still somehow despite it all we reach out destinations safely, accomplish objectives, after late evening soirees. The surf withdraws pulling at one's ankle's mightily like two hands before forming a powerful unstoppable wave and returning. There is great strength in weakness, just a matter of discerning between what Truly matters and what is Truly minutia, that takes time and training. Same ol' struggle, embracing Him or our own nature, it's only human. Another very thought provoking piece, as of now there are currently twelve views...more than half of them are from me. That's how much i've pondered these thoughts and what they provoke in me...the reader. It's all good Brother! PEACE. Romans 8:28
God Bless
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: YOU GAZE Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:00 pm | |
| Love the piece and loved the comments made on it.
Hope you are having a wonderful Christmas! |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: YOU GAZE Mon Dec 26, 2011 11:00 pm | |
| Great work. Love the little nuggets of truth you put into your poetry. |
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