cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Born to Die Thu Dec 29, 2011 7:12 pm | |
| By Jan Phillips
Long ago in times gone by
A child was born just like I
But he was special and people came
To worship him just the same.
But he was born just to die
To save people like you and I
He gave us a chance to live
He had so much to give
He grew from a child into a man
That was part of God’s plan
He was perfect while He was here
But the price He paid was so dear.
When He died upon that cross
It was a really great loss
But we reaped the benefit
If we would only repent.
Three men died on that cross
Two were saved, but one was lost.
The third man lost his soul
Where it now burns in a deep hellhole.
One man went to paradise that day
Because he asked to be that way
The other man he rose to live again
And so now a whole other life began.
So now we have a choice to make
Just as long as we are not a fake
We can go to either Heaven or hell
But only God and time will tell. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Born to Die Thu Dec 29, 2011 7:42 pm | |
| Nice work. A powerful piece of work.
Three men died on that cross
Two were saved, but one was lost.
The third man lost his soul
Where it now burns in a deep hellhole. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Born to Die Fri Dec 30, 2011 8:01 pm | |
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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Re: Born to Die Fri Apr 06, 2012 3:18 pm | |
| Just wanted everyone to have a Happy Easter. Knowing what was paid for it. Love you guys. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Born to Die Fri Apr 06, 2012 3:30 pm | |
| Much love and big hugs to you Miss Cleo. Happy Easter! What a joyous time of year this is. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Born to Die Sat Apr 07, 2012 4:14 am | |
| Have a Happy Easter Jan. Blessings to you. |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Born to Die Sat Apr 07, 2012 12:26 pm | |
| Much love and hugs to you sweet friend!!! |
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