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rhymarhyma
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 |  Subject: angel-9 Sun Jan 01, 2012 12:45 pm | |
| Under the cover of night
or the sun's brightest light
He holds his head high
as he fights the good fight
With super-human compassion
and the kindness of ten men
Always helping others
over and over again
He has a vision of peace
even as peace is on the decline
Who is this hero?
They call him angel-9
She offers all she has
and asks only one thing in return
and that's we all do the same
when it comes to our turn
She says all will have the chance
to lend a helping hand
To spread one true love
all across the land
In her beautiful mind
every town will have a sign
"All are welcome here"
and it's signed "angel-9"
They don't wear a cape
nor a mask upon their face
They can't become invisible
or disappear without a trace
They can't fly above the skies
or make a building rise
Lasers don't beam
when they open their eyes
They're just regular people
with a spectacular design
and if we look in our own hearts
we are all angel-9
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Lora
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:00 pm | |
| Beautiful work as always. Love the message!  I found a couple of typos I thought you might want to know about:and that 's we all do the same when they open s their eyes |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:17 pm | |
| really cool...i was a big comic book fan in my younger days so i really, really appreciate this approach and as usual, excellent message.
Peace...
oh...almost forgot...
RHYMA !!
...in da' house !!
God Bless. |
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rhymarhyma
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:32 pm | |
| Right on! Just figured out how to do this on my phone, and I don't like it. Thanks for the typo alert! Anthony!!! I miss ya, brotha. Word. |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 6:44 am | |
| Ya'll and tecnology! I still have to pump sunshine in so I can see to type on this Underwood. Ok maybe it's a Brother's anyway, great word and style. A really enjoyable read. |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:33 am | |
|  I finally gave in and started texting last January. I've learned that if you have teenagers, it's an absolute must. You're so uncool if you don't. |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:46 am | |
| i'm not cool ...sniff...sniff:( |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:11 pm | |
| I think they have a Gramma's text for folks like me. I don't have a fancy Iphone so it is harder to see and it keeps correcting my words..lol
Love the verse and message! |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:25 pm | |
| We all need a little help. I can't read half the stuff my son texts to me anyway. I don't have an iphone either, just one that lets me text. He thinks I'm weird because I spell everything correctly and include punctuation. I couldn't be cool to save my life. |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:31 pm | |
| I wasn't cool even before the hot flashes started...lol
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:36 pm | |
|  Oh, my goodness. What will we ever do with you Miss Thena. You make my sides ache. |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:44 pm | |
| boo...booooo... get the hook...hit the gong! somebody gong her!! LOL!! miss thena...!!  |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:48 pm | |
| LOL I will be here all week... |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:16 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:24 pm | |
| Of course being a "writer" I refer to them as power surges and as a GRIT (girl raised in the south) they are personal summers... |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:34 pm | |
| I like you're description better. My mom just called them annoying, and my dad knew that it was a time to avoid her. He couldn't take the heat Her's were so bad that she once fogged up the windows in their car. |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:39 pm | |
| "couldn't take the heat!" LOL good one...  Or ROFLACGBU rolling on floor laughing and can't get back up |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:55 pm | |
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:Cross Catholic
....and forgive us our trespasses... |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:18 pm | |
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We changed churches and I always forget whether I am a debtor or a trespasser...
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 4:25 pm | |
| I fear that sometimes I stammer out debtpassor.... |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 5:19 pm | |
| It can be quite embarrassing-especially if those around you remember the day you forgot to take a big curler out of the back of your h  air. |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:34 pm | |
| I am WAY COOL according to all the kids I know. Why, couldn't say, just old enough to fake it I guess. Never went through hot flashes thank God. He knew I would have killed some one so he spared me. |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 10:10 pm | |
| Why Miss Cleo, didn't know you were so feisty! Perhaps that's why the kids think you're so cool.  |
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| | Subject: Re: angel-9 Mon Jan 02, 2012 10:47 pm | |
| Isn't feisty what they call old people who don't know how to act their age? |
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