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 Did You See The Man

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PostSubject: Did You See The Man   Did You See The Man EmptyMon Jan 02, 2012 6:28 am

Did You See The Man

Did you see the man - who walked on the shore
Calling to men - loving them so
Much more than they knew

Did you see the man - up on the hill
Speaking to crowds - standing so still
In the morning dew

Did you see the man - cast to the ground
Held tight as men - pushed a thorn platted crown
On His head

Did you see the man - as they led Him away
To Calvary's hill - crucifiction day
Till He was dead

Did you see the man - On that first day
After He rose - and proved that He
Really was the way

Did you see the man - as He came to His own
Gave this promice to them - to carry them home
To His Father one day

Did youu see the man - His feet and His hands
The strength is still there - to help you to stand
In your day

Did you see the man - the marks in His brow
Where He wore the thorns - to show you just how
You can love

YOU CAN LOVE
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PostSubject: Re: Did You See The Man   Did You See The Man EmptyMon Jan 02, 2012 9:00 am

beautiful!


did you hear the guy on the c.b. radio?
who said "gather near i have something on my heart i want to share with you?"

did you see?
did you hear?
do you speak?

you sure did!


GOD BLESS
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PostSubject: Re: Did You See The Man   Did You See The Man EmptyMon Jan 02, 2012 1:30 pm

Another one to read again and again.
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PostSubject: Re: Did You See The Man   Did You See The Man EmptyMon Jan 02, 2012 4:24 pm

Absolutely beautiful. I agree, another one to read over and over.

I get in trouble when I don't mention it...I won't mention names Did You See The Man 4278138673 ...but I found a few typos that you might like to know about:

Did you see the man - as they led Him away
To Calvary's hill - crucifiction day
Till He was dead
crucifixion

Did you see the man - as He came to His own
Gave this promice to them - to carry them home
To His Father one day
promise

Did youu see the man - His feet and His hands
The strength is still there - to help you to stand
In your day
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