Jak Hardy WRITER (51-100 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 82 Age : 27 Join date : 2011-11-07 Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia
| Subject: Ancient Lullaby Tue Jan 03, 2012 12:53 am | |
| By the light of the sun, the eagle flies, through the rays of warmth that weave across skies. Kissing the seas, stroking the grounds; A living melody, a sweet holy sound.
In the crystalline glacier, white ice breaks, Crunching in water, in a splash recreates Rolling forward in motion, slow but sure; A frozen composition; a sacred overture.
Virgo the virgin, bearing in arm, A tuft of wheat and a crown for her Son, Royal nebulae clothed in stellar apparel; A perfect psalm; a heavenly carol.
The double stranded helix- our life in a gene, Our mind a pound of flesh where dwell our goals and dreams. Uncountable hairs, nerves limb to limb, A love-crafted canticle; a personal hymn.
From age to age, an intelligent design, By a God who exceeds far beyond time. From the roar of a wave to a lion’s cry; An eternal anthem. An ancient lullaby. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Ancient Lullaby Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:05 am | |
| Wow! You have some awesome talent! You swept me through a sweet minstrel of sensory euphoria. |
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vinedresser WORDSMITH (251-300 posts)
Posts : 259 Age : 68 Join date : 2011-10-10 Location : Arkansas
| Subject: Re: Ancient Lullaby Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:55 pm | |
| Kicked the level way up on this one. Great piece of writing. Blessings |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Ancient Lullaby Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:57 pm | |
| this isn't a word i usually use but here goes...absolutely gorgeous!! there i said it !! |
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vinedresser WORDSMITH (251-300 posts)
Posts : 259 Age : 68 Join date : 2011-10-10 Location : Arkansas
| Subject: Re: Ancient Lullaby Tue Jan 03, 2012 3:02 pm | |
| Makes me understand more just how far I have to go. TALENT AND GIFTED |
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