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Jak Hardy
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PostSubject: Ancient Lullaby   Ancient Lullaby EmptyTue Jan 03, 2012 12:53 am

By the light of the sun, the eagle flies,
through the rays of warmth that weave across skies.
Kissing the seas, stroking the grounds;
A living melody, a sweet holy sound.

In the crystalline glacier, white ice breaks,
Crunching in water, in a splash recreates
Rolling forward in motion, slow but sure;
A frozen composition; a sacred overture.

Virgo the virgin, bearing in arm,
A tuft of wheat and a crown for her Son,
Royal nebulae clothed in stellar apparel;
A perfect psalm; a heavenly carol.

The double stranded helix- our life in a gene,
Our mind a pound of flesh where dwell our goals and dreams.
Uncountable hairs, nerves limb to limb,
A love-crafted canticle; a personal hymn.

From age to age, an intelligent design,
By a God who exceeds far beyond time.
From the roar of a wave to a lion’s cry;
An eternal anthem. An ancient lullaby.
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PostSubject: Re: Ancient Lullaby   Ancient Lullaby EmptyTue Jan 03, 2012 1:05 am

Wow! You have some awesome talent! You swept me through a sweet minstrel of sensory euphoria.
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PostSubject: Re: Ancient Lullaby   Ancient Lullaby EmptyTue Jan 03, 2012 2:55 pm

Kicked the level way up on this one. Great piece of writing. Blessings
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PostSubject: Re: Ancient Lullaby   Ancient Lullaby EmptyTue Jan 03, 2012 2:57 pm

this isn't a word i usually use but here goes...absolutely gorgeous!!
there i said it !!
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PostSubject: Re: Ancient Lullaby   Ancient Lullaby EmptyTue Jan 03, 2012 3:02 pm

Makes me understand more just how far I have to go. TALENT AND GIFTED
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