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 God's Creation

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JoycelynRenette
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PostSubject: God's Creation   God's Creation EmptyFri Jan 13, 2012 5:55 pm

A sculputure in progress indeed
Brown mountain of clay
Substance created from the world
Smooth to the touch; quick to harden
In mind, in frame, wholeheartedly
Creator stepping back, basking in
the progress; progress of his masterpiece
Working man's hands dipped in the water of the Nile
Molding, shaping, removing, adding; able to be healed
Able to be broken; never losing the pieces to be put back
together with strength; strength of a two edge sword
Merciful delicacy of salvation penetrate the surface
Particular drawings it's way inside my being stedfast
In his journey to create works of art to do His will
Indeed; No questions of tomorrow
Will you, Are you, Could you be a scultpure in progress

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PostSubject: Re: God's Creation   God's Creation EmptyFri Jan 13, 2012 11:14 pm

Beautiful message. I love the metaphor. Especially love how you show God admiring his creation. Awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: God's Creation   God's Creation EmptySat Jan 14, 2012 6:19 am

very visual, loved it could really envision it.
nice work.
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