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cleo574
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PostSubject: I Want Too   I Want Too EmptySat Jan 28, 2012 10:51 pm

By Jan Phillips


I’ve done my very best
To tell all the rest
What God has done for me.

He died on the cross
That was a great loss
But it saved my life.

I’ve been close to death
He restored my breath
And gave me one more chance.

He has given me many blessings
I can’t count, I’m guessing
I’d say it’s a million or more

He gives me things to do
That I don’t know I can
Until He shows me how
Then there I am.

Each thing that comes along
That he wants me to do
He doesn’t just tell me to do it
He makes me want to do it too.

God is the ruler of my world
And I love Him above all else
He knew all about me before I was born
He gave me His life so now I give Him mine.


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PostSubject: Re: I Want Too   I Want Too EmptySat Jan 28, 2012 10:58 pm

I love the way you pour your heart into your work. I especially loved this stanza:

Each thing that comes along
That he wants me to do
He doesn’t just tell me to do it
He makes me want to do it too.

Isn't it cool that He does that for us?! It reminds us writers that He put this desire to write into our hearts, because that's what He wants us to do. Great work!
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PostSubject: Re: I Want Too   I Want Too EmptySun Jan 29, 2012 3:11 am

Thanks. Pouring my heart into my poems is the only way I know how to write. God gives me the words, I just write them down for Him.
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PostSubject: Re: I Want Too   I Want Too EmptySun Jan 29, 2012 9:16 am

God bless my friend Jan
Who loves you so much
She gives our days
Such a sweet and loving touch.
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