cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: I Want Too Sat Jan 28, 2012 10:51 pm | |
| By Jan Phillips
I’ve done my very best To tell all the rest What God has done for me.
He died on the cross That was a great loss But it saved my life.
I’ve been close to death He restored my breath And gave me one more chance.
He has given me many blessings I can’t count, I’m guessing I’d say it’s a million or more
He gives me things to do That I don’t know I can Until He shows me how Then there I am.
Each thing that comes along That he wants me to do He doesn’t just tell me to do it He makes me want to do it too.
God is the ruler of my world And I love Him above all else He knew all about me before I was born He gave me His life so now I give Him mine.
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: I Want Too Sat Jan 28, 2012 10:58 pm | |
| I love the way you pour your heart into your work. I especially loved this stanza:
Each thing that comes along That he wants me to do He doesn’t just tell me to do it He makes me want to do it too.
Isn't it cool that He does that for us?! It reminds us writers that He put this desire to write into our hearts, because that's what He wants us to do. Great work! |
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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Re: I Want Too Sun Jan 29, 2012 3:11 am | |
| Thanks. Pouring my heart into my poems is the only way I know how to write. God gives me the words, I just write them down for Him. |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Want Too Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:16 am | |
| God bless my friend Jan Who loves you so much She gives our days Such a sweet and loving touch.
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