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Jak Hardy
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Jak Hardy

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Posts : 82
Age : 27
Join date : 2011-11-07
Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia

Ice-glazed Heart Empty
PostSubject: Ice-glazed Heart   Ice-glazed Heart EmptyThu Feb 02, 2012 12:51 pm

Frosted walls of chamber's depths,
Heart of lost; heart unslept,
In darkned chambers echoes cry,
Abandoned. Rejected. Denied.

Icy yearning, frozen desire,
Soul of vanity. A funeral pyre.
In empty corridors, ghosts of past weep.
Derelict. Forgotten. Eternal sleep.

Two wooden planks moulded together,
Acacia: ageless, resistant to weather.
Standing amid three, the only to cement,
A warm composition to melt an ice-glazed lament.
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Lora
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Age : 53
Join date : 2011-07-26
Location : Southern CA

Ice-glazed Heart Empty
PostSubject: Re: Ice-glazed Heart   Ice-glazed Heart EmptyThu Feb 02, 2012 10:26 pm

You just blow me away. I don't know if it was intentional, but I saw visions of the Cross and a frozen heart warm with tears of joy in the last stanza. Have you ever been published?
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Jak Hardy
WRITER (51-100 posts)
WRITER (51-100 posts)
Jak Hardy

POETRY CONTEST WINNER POETRY CONTEST WINNER
Posts : 82
Age : 27
Join date : 2011-11-07
Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia

Ice-glazed Heart Empty
PostSubject: Re: Ice-glazed Heart   Ice-glazed Heart EmptyThu Feb 02, 2012 10:40 pm

Lora-
In grade six and seven (2007, 2008), two very very amateur poems were published in a local anthology run by VOICES ON THE COAST YOUTH LITERATURE FESTIVAL. Other than that, I haven't, though I aspire to one day perhaps create an anthology called:
Ancient Lullabies: Verses for the Inspired, so by title it will catch the eye of the non believer.
I do have a blog at proactive4people.wordpress.com that I strive to upload all my works on.
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PostSubject: Re: Ice-glazed Heart   Ice-glazed Heart EmptyThu Feb 02, 2012 10:47 pm

I have every confidence there's a publisher out there that would be delighted to publish your work. It's very good.
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