Jak Hardy WRITER (51-100 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 82 Age : 27 Join date : 2011-11-07 Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia
| Subject: Ice-glazed Heart Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:51 pm | |
| Frosted walls of chamber's depths, Heart of lost; heart unslept, In darkned chambers echoes cry, Abandoned. Rejected. Denied.
Icy yearning, frozen desire, Soul of vanity. A funeral pyre. In empty corridors, ghosts of past weep. Derelict. Forgotten. Eternal sleep.
Two wooden planks moulded together, Acacia: ageless, resistant to weather. Standing amid three, the only to cement, A warm composition to melt an ice-glazed lament. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Ice-glazed Heart Thu Feb 02, 2012 10:26 pm | |
| You just blow me away. I don't know if it was intentional, but I saw visions of the Cross and a frozen heart warm with tears of joy in the last stanza. Have you ever been published? |
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Jak Hardy WRITER (51-100 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 82 Age : 27 Join date : 2011-11-07 Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia
| Subject: Re: Ice-glazed Heart Thu Feb 02, 2012 10:40 pm | |
| Lora- In grade six and seven (2007, 2008), two very very amateur poems were published in a local anthology run by VOICES ON THE COAST YOUTH LITERATURE FESTIVAL. Other than that, I haven't, though I aspire to one day perhaps create an anthology called: Ancient Lullabies: Verses for the Inspired, so by title it will catch the eye of the non believer. I do have a blog at proactive4people.wordpress.com that I strive to upload all my works on. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Ice-glazed Heart Thu Feb 02, 2012 10:47 pm | |
| I have every confidence there's a publisher out there that would be delighted to publish your work. It's very good. |
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