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PostSubject: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 8:10 am


Stared into a mirror too long
looked you in the face
and was frozen
saw learned behaviors
saw disgrace
ashamed
of the paths previously chosen
tried to set those sights
on a better place

down for a good while
unable to smile
wicked and vile
slowly going insane
set those sights
on a higher plane

woke up one day
in colors
background of
monochromatic light
greeted by two eagles
by Divine intervention
return of sight
the world
had labeled us insane
set those sights
on embracing
a God given name

tried to change the world around without first purging the world from within
grappling with You in transition was futility, set those sights on opening a mind to a
Teacher

Letting You in
surrender
in the heat
of "The Way"
the fatted calf
was rendered

at the joyous feast
a smile reset
a mind reset
a heart reset
an offer…
brokenness
to kneel at Your Cross

if You will have us
to serve You?
You are the only answer
to all having lived without
in a time
when thought was considered clever

"i believe, help my unbelief"
take away
any and all hidden doubt
please be a guiding strength
to undertake a bold new
"endeavor"

if it please Thy Majesty
then it would please us too
if it be Thy Will
might we be Your's
now and forever?





"my senses tremble"
our senses may tremble when we open ourselves and allow an hour, a time that is ripe for us, to really touch us
.-Rainier Maria Rilke


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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 1:18 pm

Love the cross shape. Cool! The meditative tone in this one is pretty awesome too. I could have chosen the whole thing to label as my favorite, but I made an extra effort and tried to pick some of the stanzas that stood out just a touch more for me:

down for a good while
unable to smile
wicked and vile
slowly going insane
set my sights
on a higher plane

Letting You in
i surrendered
in the heat
of "The Way"
the fatted calf
was rendered

at the joyous feast
a smile reset
a mind reset
a heart reset
i offer myself
my brokenness
i lay at Your Cross
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 1:33 pm

Quote :
f You will have me
may i serve You?
You are the only answer
to all i have lived without
in a time
when i thought myself clever

"i believe, help my unbelief"
take away from me
any and all hidden doubt
please be my guide
and my strength
to undertake a bold new
"endeavor"

if it please Thy Majesty
then it would please me too
if it be Thy Will
might i be Your's
now and forever?

My new favorite of yours...have I said that before?
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 1:38 pm

the older past "favorites" feel jealous, what shall i say to comfort them?
thank you


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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 1:39 pm

LOL Tell them they are still loved too!
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 1:41 pm

soon as they stop crying, i will try to tell them.
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 1:42 pm

LOL Sounds like a plan!
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 2:37 pm

Lessons 1806963828 You two are hilarious. I love reading your discussion almost as much as I love reading your writings.
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 2:41 pm

miss thena, do you have any idea what she's talking about?
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 3:15 pm

No idea whatsoever but whatever it is....I'm sure you started it...lol
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 3:17 pm

Lessons 3356767072 I'm sure he did.
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 3:35 pm

I had two older brothers that I had to survive with. LOL
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 3:49 pm

That explains a lot. I had a sister, but the competition was no less strenuous since we were both tom girls. Daddy raised us that way.
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 4:13 pm

psst...i did start it.
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 4:23 pm

LOL Told you he did!
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu Feb 09, 2012 4:31 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyThu May 02, 2013 8:55 pm

culprit yup!
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyFri May 03, 2013 10:37 am

Sounds like a couple of kids going after it. Reminds me of my sister and me. Gotta love it. Oh yeah, good poem also, Eagle. Now, I'm gonna make a dirty face and ya'll won't know it. Heh, heh, heh.
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyFri May 03, 2013 12:23 pm

We were waiting for you...did you remember to bring the donuts?
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyFri May 03, 2013 12:27 pm

LOL fork I'm ready.
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyFri May 03, 2013 4:04 pm

He always starts it...I am just a cute little ole gray haired lady..... 👼
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I'm starting to wonder about that Lessons 4039182808 Lessons 602475912
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptySun May 05, 2013 9:10 am

Thank you Lora, I wasn't gonna go there but now that you mention it...
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptySun May 05, 2013 12:55 pm

I Love You twinkle toes pillow fight
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptySun May 05, 2013 1:25 pm

I guess you are a "cute little ole gray haired lady." Big hugs Lessons 1839924927
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyMon May 06, 2013 10:14 pm

cute and gray hair? yaaa, I finally fit in somewhere? somebody please say I do. Love ya'll to pieces (reeces pieces?) Blessings
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyTue May 07, 2013 1:03 am

Yep, you fit right in! drums
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyMon May 27, 2013 4:24 am

Y'all are delusional...I got some self help books if you need em'.
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PostSubject: Re: Lessons   Lessons EmptyMon May 27, 2013 10:36 am

Self help? Like a buffet?
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