rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: One in the chamber Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:13 am | |
| I saw the tears that you cried from the fears deep inside I'm the one in the chamber and I'm ready to ride
It's never gonna stop...click, click, POP Slowly squeeze the trigger as you watch yourself drop Feel a sense of freedom that you never felt before All the pain goes away before your body hits the floor Bloodstains rain all across the wall You rose to the world...and to the world you will fall
I know you don't want to die, but you no longer want to cry I'm the one in the chamber and I'm ready to fly
Don't try and stop it now...click, click, POW Barrel to the temple as you take your final bow How could everybody leave you, all alone, to carry on One moment you're here, and in an instant you're gone If this truly is your answer, I guess the question was in doubt Feel the cold rush of death as your life rushes out...
You already know it's the end of the show I'm the one in the chamber and I'm ready to go
Can't stop the gloom and doom...click, click, BOOM Precious little flower never had a chance to bloom Got caught in the dark because he couldn't hear the light calling, reaching out, in the middle of his night He chose the voice of the world, the voice that broke him apart as he ignored the one in the chamber...the chamber of his heart |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: One in the chamber Sun Feb 12, 2012 2:27 am | |
| i really relate to your work it sounds like everything that was around me growing up and that had grown in me. |
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vinedresser WORDSMITH (251-300 posts)
Posts : 259 Age : 68 Join date : 2011-10-10 Location : Arkansas
| Subject: Re: One in the chamber Sun Feb 12, 2012 6:02 am | |
| Extremely dark, but how many of us don't/can't relate to what you eloquently yet simply share here? I'm there with ya on this ride. Wish I could do your style. but that is what makes us all different, united in one cause. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: One in the chamber Sun Feb 12, 2012 2:31 pm | |
| You have an uncanny knack of getting my heart racing! Your unique ebullience is a priceless addition to the eclectic group of writers we have here. I am so grateful for all the varying talents that contribute to this site. Without each of their differing and unique talents, life would be boring. |
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