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rhymarhyma
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PostSubject: One in the chamber   One in the chamber EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 1:13 am

I saw the tears that you cried from the fears deep inside
I'm the one in the chamber and I'm ready to ride

It's never gonna stop...click, click, POP
Slowly squeeze the trigger as you watch yourself drop
Feel a sense of freedom that you never felt before
All the pain goes away before your body hits the floor
Bloodstains rain all across the wall
You rose to the world...and to the world you will fall

I know you don't want to die, but you no longer want to cry
I'm the one in the chamber and I'm ready to fly

Don't try and stop it now...click, click, POW
Barrel to the temple as you take your final bow
How could everybody leave you, all alone, to carry on
One moment you're here, and in an instant you're gone
If this truly is your answer, I guess the question was in doubt
Feel the cold rush of death as your life rushes out...

You already know it's the end of the show
I'm the one in the chamber and I'm ready to go

Can't stop the gloom and doom...click, click, BOOM
Precious little flower never had a chance to bloom
Got caught in the dark because he couldn't hear the light
calling, reaching out, in the middle of his night
He chose the voice of the world, the voice that broke him apart
as he ignored the one in the chamber...the chamber of his heart
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PostSubject: Re: One in the chamber   One in the chamber EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 2:27 am

i really relate to your work it sounds like everything that was around me growing up and that had grown in me.
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PostSubject: Re: One in the chamber   One in the chamber EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 6:02 am

Extremely dark, but how many of us don't/can't relate to what you eloquently yet simply share here? I'm there with ya on this ride. Wish I could do your style. but that is what makes us all different, united in one cause.
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PostSubject: Re: One in the chamber   One in the chamber EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 2:31 pm

You have an uncanny knack of getting my heart racing! Your unique ebullience is a priceless addition to the eclectic group of writers we have here. I am so grateful for all the varying talents that contribute to this site. Without each of their differing and unique talents, life would be boring.
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