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cleo574
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PostSubject: Jesus Said   Jesus Said EmptyThu Sep 01, 2011 9:24 pm

JESUS SAID
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Jan Phillips
You can climb the highest mountain
You can swim the deepest sea
But the path to paradise is still through me.
You can walk the longest highway
You can drive the longest miles
But the path to paradise is still through me.
I gave you free will to do as you wish
You can go to work or just go fish
But the path to paradise is still through me.
You can travel from state to state
To see what you can see
But the path to paradise is still through me.
You can drink the evil spirits
Until you can’t walk or stand
But the path to paradise is still through me.
You can get high on dope
And live in a fog
But the path to paradise is still through me.
You can work every day
From dawn to dusk
But the path to paradise is still through me.
You can be good to your fellow man
And be as nice as you can be
But the path to paradise is still through me.
Try as you might
Doing what’s right
The path to paradise is still through me
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PostSubject: Re: Jesus Said   Jesus Said EmptyThu Sep 01, 2011 10:50 pm

Please don't ever stop reminding me of this,
God bless.
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PostSubject: Re: Jesus Said   Jesus Said EmptyThu Sep 01, 2011 11:28 pm

You used quite an interesting style, using the refrain every third line to drive home the point. Very nicely done cleo574. Loved it.
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PostSubject: Re: Jesus Said   Jesus Said EmptySun Dec 25, 2011 11:57 pm




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