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PostSubject: Watching God's World   Watching God's World EmptySun Mar 18, 2012 4:19 pm

Watching God’s World

I sit here in my window
And look out upon the scene
Nobody pays much attention
I'm such a tiny human being.
Mommy thinks I'm watching
All the cars go passing by
(She doesn't realize that
I'm looking at God's sky!).
Daddy thinks I'm looking at the trucks
With monster wheel and frame
(He didn't see the butterfly
or notice when it came).
I watch it all throughout the day
From my tiny baby seat.
And being so fresh sent from God
The world looks oh so sweet!
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PostSubject: Re: Watching God's World   Watching God's World EmptySun Mar 18, 2012 11:28 pm

I love the tenderness in this. So sweet. It's like a big hug.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching God's World   Watching God's World EmptyTue Mar 20, 2012 7:57 pm

I love the perspective! Sweet poem.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching God's World   Watching God's World EmptyTue Mar 20, 2012 10:48 pm

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