Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Child's Surgery-Through Tears Tue Mar 20, 2012 6:33 pm | |
| Through Tears
I watched as you so bravely Went through all the pain. I knew you must be frightened But you never said a thing!
You were so grown up And handled your surgery so fine Oh yes, there were lots of tears... but they were mine! Thena |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Child's Surgery-Through Tears Tue Mar 20, 2012 11:06 pm | |
| I can't imagine what that would be like as a parent. I've been truly blessed with healthy children. Such sweet verse. |
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JoeT SCRIBE (101-150posts)
CCW SUPPORTER Posts : 107 Age : 65 Join date : 2012-02-08 Location : Surrey BC
| Subject: Re: Child's Surgery-Through Tears Wed Mar 21, 2012 8:30 pm | |
| I like the way you capture a childs trust
But you never said a thing!
You were so grown up
we do tend to lose some of that as adults don't we |
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worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: Child's Surgery-Through Tears Wed Mar 21, 2012 9:04 pm | |
| If you don't have the faith of a child, I tell you you will never see the gates of Heaven. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Child's Surgery-Through Tears Wed Mar 21, 2012 9:07 pm | |
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bewhary WRITER (51-100 posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER SHORT STORY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 91 Age : 58 Join date : 2011-12-13 Location : Mechanicsburg, PA
| Subject: Re: Child's Surgery-Through Tears Tue Apr 03, 2012 7:08 am | |
| Having gone through a MINOR surgery with my child..this brought back sweet memories of that.. he bravery.. my tears.. so poignant! And so accurate.. Thank you! Loved it! |
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