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 Child's Surgery-Through Tears

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PostSubject: Child's Surgery-Through Tears   Child's Surgery-Through Tears EmptyTue Mar 20, 2012 6:33 pm

Through Tears

I watched as you so bravely
Went through all the pain.
I knew you must be frightened
But you never said a thing!

You were so grown up
And handled your surgery so fine
Oh yes, there were lots of tears...
but they were mine!
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PostSubject: Re: Child's Surgery-Through Tears   Child's Surgery-Through Tears EmptyTue Mar 20, 2012 11:06 pm

I can't imagine what that would be like as a parent. I've been truly blessed with healthy children. Such sweet verse.
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PostSubject: Re: Child's Surgery-Through Tears   Child's Surgery-Through Tears EmptyWed Mar 21, 2012 8:30 pm

I like the way you capture a childs trust

But you never said a thing!

You were so grown up


we do tend to lose some of that as adults don't we
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PostSubject: Re: Child's Surgery-Through Tears   Child's Surgery-Through Tears EmptyWed Mar 21, 2012 9:04 pm

If you don't have the faith of a child, I tell you you will never see the gates of Heaven.
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PostSubject: Re: Child's Surgery-Through Tears   Child's Surgery-Through Tears EmptyWed Mar 21, 2012 9:07 pm

very nice miss thena.
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PostSubject: Re: Child's Surgery-Through Tears   Child's Surgery-Through Tears EmptyTue Apr 03, 2012 7:08 am

Having gone through a MINOR surgery with my child..this brought back sweet memories of that.. he bravery.. my tears.. so poignant! And so accurate.. Thank you! Loved it!
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