Natsheart APPRENTICE (6-25 posts)
Posts : 15 Join date : 2012-03-30 Location : Perth, Western Australia
| Subject: Forest Sat Mar 31, 2012 7:42 pm | |
| FOREST
I walked into your forest It glistened with drops of dew, It spoke so gently, so still A whisper of sounds so few.
Majestic is your forests depth An abundance of life and strength To feel the presence of your grandeur That left me without breath.
The aroma of your forest That coats my palates midst The sweetness of your atmosphere Sensual within your gist.
This forest is another place On this gracious earth called home Where your beauty reigns its final hour Where spirits are free to roam.
Your forest remains so pure’ In stillness it will grow, It cannot alter what is life Because it does not know. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Forest Sat Mar 31, 2012 11:04 pm | |
| Beautiful scenery. Love the descriptions and the use of physical senses as in these verses:
A whisper of sounds so few.
To feel the presence of your grandeur That left me without breath.
The aroma of your forest That coats my palates midst The sweetness of your atmosphere |
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