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Natsheart
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Join date : 2012-03-30
Location : Perth, Western Australia

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PostSubject: Forest   Forest EmptySat Mar 31, 2012 7:42 pm

FOREST

I walked into your forest
It glistened with drops of dew,
It spoke so gently, so still
A whisper of sounds so few.

Majestic is your forests depth
An abundance of life and strength
To feel the presence of your grandeur
That left me without breath.

The aroma of your forest
That coats my palates midst
The sweetness of your atmosphere
Sensual within your gist.

This forest is another place
On this gracious earth called home
Where your beauty reigns its final hour
Where spirits are free to roam.

Your forest remains so pure’
In stillness it will grow,
It cannot alter what is life
Because it does not know.


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Location : Southern CA

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PostSubject: Re: Forest   Forest EmptySat Mar 31, 2012 11:04 pm

Beautiful scenery. Love the descriptions and the use of physical senses as in these verses:

A whisper of sounds so few.

To feel the presence of your grandeur
That left me without breath.

The aroma of your forest
That coats my palates midst
The sweetness of your atmosphere
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