I am a Fool FINAL DRAFT

Perishing within Babylon's ssssin.

Opulent is the beast in it's din.

Whipping fury unto my sssskin.

Won't you forgive me?

Relinquish my ssssin. . .

I swear! I promise. . .

I've fooled us again.

Convicting piece sent a chill down my spine. Thank you for sharing this sister. I love the simple yet poignant pieces.

I agree, it sent a chill down my spine. If I compare the two, I would say that they each convey a different feeling. This one makes me feel the filthiness of sin down to the core, and other one made me feel remorse for sin. I think they are equally great and can even be kept as two separate works with a similar theme.

I agree, I like to sit and tweek words. Thank you all very much.