rhymarhyma
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 |  Subject: No separation Thu Apr 05, 2012 8:18 pm | |
| Lost souls aren't lost, and they don't get lonely
We're not the first, the last, or the one and only
We sometimes let ourselves wander, pondering the dark
but it's never pitch-black, there's a glimmering spark
way far away, barely lighting the way
that at our darkest hour ignites a brand-new day
We see it...we hear it...
we feel it...we fear it...
We don't wanna change, so we don't wanna be near it
It's the bright to our soul, the light to our spirit
the flame to our heart, the fire to our mind
When we stray from true love, it's true love that we find
and that flickering spark was just a sign
because there is no separation-Romans 8:39 |
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Lora
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| | Subject: Re: No separation Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:05 pm | |
| Love the inclusion of the Bible verse and the way you managed to make it rhyme. Smart. It really makes it jump out at you.
When we stray from true love, it's true love that we find
and that flickering spark was just a sign
because there is no separation-Romans 8:39 |
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worshipfreely
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| | Subject: Re: No separation Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:36 am | |
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