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crystalleek
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PostSubject: A Riddle   A Riddle EmptyThu May 24, 2012 10:48 am
If I were a place. . .

Where would I be?

Underneath statements of delicacy?

Clever.

To look beyond leather.

The rabbit knows no better.

However,

Letters as wide as desert.

Score the masterpiece with a feather.

Yea,

My words make it better.

Feel empty?

Questions ring answers with equal meanings.

This place evokes real feelings,

Accept,

Reject,

Nonetheless I stay perfect.
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PostSubject: Re: A Riddle   A Riddle EmptyThu May 24, 2012 4:13 pm
As usual, beautiful work. You're a master at working words together to produce feeling. Love it!
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PostSubject: Re: A Riddle   A Riddle EmptyThu May 24, 2012 4:56 pm
Love it too!
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